[New J-Rock FanFiction] Ride With The Rockers

[scheatcafe]

Comments

[fffriction1984]

Yah, it was interesting to read, seems like there are some twists coming up, but you should perhaps do a spelling check (the armatur instead of amateur cracked me up so much, sorry. XD). But seems like a nice read. :3

and for the non-yaoi fics: I write het, maybe you want to stop by and have a look although i was bashed for my shitty ass writing some time ago, but see for yourself. XD

[scheatcafe]

my spellcheck didn't pick that up -_- it's official that Microsoft Word suck and that my proof reading sucks. But yeah there are and thanks for reading. I'll take a look at yours when I get home

[fffriction1984]

I didn't mean to be rude by pointing that out, alright? :3

[scheatcafe]

No worries! I didn't think you were rude at all ^_^ Pointing out good and bad is a good thing for comments on stories. The only thing that is bad is bashing.

[pelting_rain]

It's a really nice start! (:
please DO continue!
haha and even though I prefer yaoi, i really like how mari and take get along (:

“Take-san,” the girl from before groaned peering at him from behind the counter, her head slumped in her hands, “if you’re done flirting with the girls, the whole next shift is yours.”
His eyes widened, “EHHH?”

HAHA! <3

[scheatcafe]

Sankyuu for reading ^.^ I'm glad this is coming from someone who prefers yaoi XD it's kind of hard to write an attractive story and gain readers when we all lovee yaoi :P

[jrockkitten]

This story is awesome! I don't see much mistakes to it, but update soon please! I kind of like the heat between Aoi and Uruha. I also can't wait to see ShinpeixRyoga!!!

[kailyne]

It was great to read - I hope that you'll continue.

[erikaoi]

I like it so far.u shud make 100% aoixuru.will wait for next chapt

[scheatcafe]

Thanks for reading ^.^ I might, it depends on what I feel like at the time, I'm just writing it as it goes XD
But Uruha definitely will have a happy ending wither either Aoi or Reita.

[erikaoi]

awww....make it happy end with aoi then coz they belong together

[drshinpeivamp]

Either that ^ or make Aoi go with the Mari, I think she's interesting hehe~ but at least let Aoi get his feelings clear to Uruha ne ne?

Update soon :3