[FanFic] Raped From Romance - Uruha/Aoi

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Comments

[erikaoi]

Cute.tow move so fast.but its hawt.definatelly need to be continue.hehe.esp reita seems have problem.wonder how aoi going to be seme

[jrockkitten]

Wahh~ I agree with the other comments, it's too fast because we want more X3

The last part was sooo cute! I loved that you added it to lighten the whole mood. Please, please write more? Especially about Reita and Mari. Onegai! m*.*m

[drshinpeivamp]

I didn't really find it awkward after reading a lot of yaoi, majority of them aren't really cute.

Well, yours became cute at the end, that was deliberate? XD

“Uke… uke? Why am I the uke? I’m supposed to be the seme!” LOL. I want to see roles reversed X3

I don't really feel angsty, except for the Mari and Reita bit, it seems like something could happen. Continue ne?

[vampire_kiki]

nicestory but still....what happened to Mari?

[scheatcafe]

I'm writing a squeal on this, that'll finish her and Reita's story.

Thank you for reading and commenting ^^

[vampire_kiki]

yeah i'm happy!

[kyoshiroelric]

i'm happy for uru&aoi but I sense danger!