Incredible.....

[schitzofrantic]

I was sitting on the back porch at my good friend Adamjohnfarrell's house, when I witness something incredible...and it is now my muse. We went out back to watch the early Summer thunder storm come in. we sat down a few minutes before it reached us, so when you look one way there was blue skies and white clouds, and you look the other way, and it's

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[anonymous]

Beatiful realization, only expressed very pretentiously.

[schitzofrantic]

Thank you, first of all. Second of all, the pretension is because I wrote it somewhat poetically, excluding rhythm and meter. This was supposed to reflect the beauty arising from the chaos in my subject, a thunderstorm. Most poetry is written somewhat showy, because showy is more descriptive. This is just the nature of poems.

But aside from all that, haven't u ever read livejournal? It makes a career out of ostentation...

~Zach~