Poems

[schnittke]

Comments

[zhengyi23]

I think they both work (honestly), but I also really like the first one.

poetry!

[jewynann]

you're so set for that class- i love your poems.
i'd suggest the 2nd one for tomorrow, i think it fits really well.
xoxo, julianne

[schnittke]

Rachel: thanks!

Marge: thanks!

Julianne: thanks! (I'll be looking forward to [possibly] reading yours tomorrow)

SO, in general, thanks. (I think you get it by now... ;) )

[limeelf7891]

i love the 2nd poem...it's like three in one, either every other line can make it into two poems (well a poem and a verse) or it can be one as a whole, very interesting, i had to read it a few times.