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[schnittke]

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[auchpom]

Interesting story! "Some reviews criticized "Paradelle for Susan" as an amateurish attempt at a difficult form without ever understanding that this was, indeed, the point." hehe, clever Billy Collins :)

There's something about how the words sound in this poem... crisp and smooth, I'm not sure how to describe it. I especially like the last stanza. Bien ecrit!

I hope you feel better (sleep!) Barret!

[jewynann]

wow barret, as always your poetry is intimidatingly wonderful. well done; you're amazing.
-j

[schnittke]

Agh, thanks guys. I feel kind-of embarrassed when I get such nice responses - I'm just putting them online so I know where they are!