Woot. Yay. My favorite type of fic too. Actually, this is the first fic I've ever written that I've finished. I would call it drabble because of it's tone, but it's a bit long for that, isn't it?
Thank you! I enjoyed writing it. Now I'm trying to let inspiration strike me for another. *thunk* Oh, and it's not my first slash...I'm a slasher to the core. Yay slash. I've writen tons. But it's my first fic in this fandom. That's what I meant.
i'm not a big fan of slash, but that was a pretty good story.
but there was good and bad:
good: Freddy just laughed. “Not my fault, dude. You grew out your hair,” he noticed with an internal groan. It was getting harder and harder to resist jumping his brown haired friend’s bones. Wait. No. Not harder. Definitely not harder. Any other word but harder.
that made me laugh.
bad: you were repetative with calling them men. i think once is enough. i know you were trying to be descriptive and all but honestly, it wasn't necessary.
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And I'm going to count it for the hair challenge, so don't worry.
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Oh, and it's not my first slash...I'm a slasher to the core. Yay slash. I've writen tons. But it's my first fic in this fandom. That's what I meant.
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PLEASE WRITE MORE. I am desperate for FZ slash.
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but there was good and bad:
good:
Freddy just laughed. “Not my fault, dude. You grew out your hair,” he noticed with an internal groan. It was getting harder and harder to resist jumping his brown haired friend’s bones. Wait. No. Not harder. Definitely not harder. Any other word but harder.
that made me laugh.
bad:
you were repetative with calling them men. i think once is enough. i know you were trying to be descriptive and all but honestly, it wasn't necessary.
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good job overall though.
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but you're very welcome.
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