Four Nights - Pt. 1: Shallow Sleep

[schwarzfluegel]

Title: Four Nights
Fandom: Gackt, Hyde
Genre: AU, Boys Love, Romance
Pairing: GakuHai
Rating: PG-13
Language: English
Summary: Gackt gets dumped by his girlfriend and wants to drown himself in alcohol to finally forget her. But before he can do so, he meets Hyde who works as a singer and entertains the costumers of a bar. They 'decide' to become

Comments

[annui]

First comment on ur fic I guess? X)

I love ur writing style, I think I'm gonna read ur other fics :3
Lol, I'm such a gakuhai fics' whore XDD

So this is an AU story! Haha I kinda confused at first because u didn't write it at disclaimer n I imagined Gackt's job as a famous singer when he got dumped until the You own a bar part made me realize this is AU! *facepalm*

Looking forward for the next chapt ;) somehow the Sweet November movie hanging around my head while reading this :DD

[schwarzfluegel]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it :3

Ah~ shit, I knew I forgot something >< I'll fix it immediately. Thanks for pointing this out ^^

Sweet November? I've never seen this movie. What is it about?

[annui]

Well, I didn't remember much about that movie, but one thing I remember is the couple in that movie was completely stranger but they stay together for a month n fall in love.

Haha not quite similar but the stranger stay together reminds me of that movie :p It's Keanu Reeves n Charlize Theron if I'm not mistaken.

[mikantoringo]

Hey..hey..
Just want to say, can't wait to see the next part!
From most of gakuhai fic that I read, Gackt who always made a move on Hyde. But it's OK, that's make yours different..
Sorry, bad english Xb
Keep writing, I'll wait..
^^

[schwarzfluegel]

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like it.

Yep, mostly Gackt's the one who's more active and Hyde's rather the passive one. But I like my cheeky little Hyde <3

[a_deux_vitesses]

Oh, I remember reading a part of this a while ago~ I liked it even then, and I'm glad you posted the whole first chapter :) Your Hyde is different from a lot of I've read before and I like it. In a way, he reminds me a bit of b_sim's Hideto in Last Night because he's doing things like kissing Gackt because he wants him to feel better, but he still has a very unique feel to him~ Looking forward to more ^^

[schwarzfluegel]

Thanks :3 I'm glad you like it!

And actually Belle's fic was the reason why I started this translation. I read Last Night and the 1st chap was already full of similarities. I told her about that and when I was done describing my fic, I suddenly wanted to translate it xD

[kairi_yume]

I thought it was fast that they ended up sleeping together already, but turns out that they didnt :P
Let Hyde heal you, Gackt~ Kiss him more~
I'm curious about how this will go, so will be waiting for the next part ^^

[schwarzfluegel]

I'm glat you like it :3

Jep jep, they end up in G's bed pretty fast. But Hyde's a gentleman, so he would never use Gackt's sadness for his own advantage.

[yuki_kumi]

So you almost done translating this fic? Yaay then I can read it soon~
Oww Gackt just let Hyde makes you forget about the girl, and I thought they already doing "it" in the first night XDD so I'm waiting for the next night! Date at 8 yay~ :p

[schwarzfluegel]

Jep jep, I'm almost done, only 3 pages, editing and the beta to do~

I'm glad you like it! I'll post the next chapter soon :3