The kid dying was part of the bunny Qzee presented me with.
Glad you like it. People seem to. Wonder where else I can post it to to get feedback.
Yes, it's dark - but I felt I had to deal with the psychological ramifications like the show never did. I think that you can't just gloss over MPreg - it's bound to have some consequences. Bah on TPTB.
And thank you for the 'believable' comment, I tend to worry about characterizations.
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I'll friend you, I swear. Right after I stop jumping up and down from my phone in which I got hired.
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Holy shit, this is dark--but I like it. Very believable. And the kid died along with his sister...wow, just wow.
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Glad you like it. People seem to. Wonder where else I can post it to to get feedback.
Yes, it's dark - but I felt I had to deal with the psychological ramifications like the show never did. I think that you can't just gloss over MPreg - it's bound to have some consequences. Bah on TPTB.
And thank you for the 'believable' comment, I tend to worry about characterizations.
Thanks for the feedback!
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