Comments | scorpionfire: story #1

scorpionfire

story #1

May 12, 2006 00:58

ok heres the deal. i start a story and if you want to you add to it and it just goes around like that untill its done! so here is the first of many yet to come!!! a couple of rules, you cant change what any one else has done, spelling doesnt (really) count, try to keep it to a 5-7 line maximum, and please dont be a jackass ( Read more... )

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fatesblood May 15 2006, 02:22:25 UTC

"Do you really think we should be here?"
"C'mon Ziriya, how bad could it be?" ScorpionFire replies "Everything is up and running...FREE doings is what it looks like to me. What do you think Fates?" Fatesblood shrugs...
"I think we really need a stretch from the car... we've been on the road forever and I'm sure the car needs a rest too.. besides, I don't know about you guys but I'm kinda interested in finding out where those screams are coming from..." Ziriya just looks at Fates like that was the one stupid this she had said all day. "Well Fates, what about the CLOWN factor? It is a Fair you know." Ziriya says with an all to familiar evil grin. "No worries... I'll just feed you to them first, you don't like to run anyways." Fates shoots back at her. "Where's your sense of adventure? That's what made us take this car trip, Remember?"
"Hey! Shhhht." Scorpion tries to get their attention..."Where are those screams coming from???"

elementalfairy May 17 2006, 16:47:47 UTC

Again the blood curdling screams came. They were so loud that they woke up the Elemental fairy sleeping in the car. Quickly she flew past Ziriya and ScorpionFire and clung to Fates arm. "What was that?! Sounds real bad Fates, you sure we want to go in there? Looks pretty questionable to me. But I will go along to help if need be." Scorpionfire and Fates started walking towards the sounds tying to figure out where they were coming from and Ziriya, against her better judgement, followed behind mumbling.

scorpionfire May 18 2006, 01:43:38 UTC

elemental fairy just stood there. ziriya turned around and said, " are you coming with us or what?" elemental fairy just looked at her and replied, " I said that i would go along to help if need be but no one said that there was a need for me!" fates turned around and just gave her the "get your ass up here look" which elemenal obeyed. they all walked up the road past empty stores and streets and the most devistating- empty bars!! scorpionfire tried to turn and go into one of the bars but fates just grabbed her arm and pulled her back. "this is not the time for that scorpionfire" scorpionfire looked at fates and said, "there is always time for a drink. and besides i need a lil courage in a shot, or two or four or whatnot" . ziriya turned to fates to see if she was buying it-which she wasnt. and then turned to elemental and asked for the cell phone. "shit its in the car!" elemental says!! "WTF?" replies scorpionfire!! "i have mine in my purse, just hold on a sec its gonna take a minute to find it in there!!"

fatesblood May 18 2006, 04:22:02 UTC

Scorpion digs through her purse pulling out everything but the kitchen sick until she finally finds the phone, just as she turns to give the phone to Z it begins to ring... "Ummmm Hello?" Scorpion answers.... "Hey are you ok?" Fates turns around to ask. "I think your talking in your sleep." Z interjects... "That was quite the interesting bar you picked out last night. I think you had tons of fun.." The girls laughs. "At least this time we didn't have to worry about "Elvis". Fates smirks a little. Scorpion shoots her a shocked look. "Hey", Z states, "While you were catching up on your Zzzzz's we noticed signs for a Fair coming up... Wanna stop?" Scorpion just gives them a creeped out look. "Hey, will you check on E. Fairy... I think that thimble of wisky did her in too... she went into her cage and hasn't been out since.? Fates asks "Heeey, look.. you can see the ferris wheel from here... What was the name of this town again?" Z asks. Horrid thoughts run through Scorpions mind... "How can this be happening? I couldn't have been ( ... )

scorpionfire June 1 2006, 04:44:57 UTC

scorpion looks around and just cannot even begin to tell them what she was thinking! e. fairy suddenly wakes and stretches and hits z. in the back of the head! "sorry" e. fairy says yawning, "whats this about a fair?" fates and z nod. "we were thinking about stopping for a bit and checking it out" fates says. "i need coffee and to stretch" z says. "i dont know if we should stop" scorp says. "well we have to stop" says fates, "we need to refuel" so they pull off the highway onto the main road. there is a gas station up ahead and they head for it. "coffee coffee coffee" sings z! scorp is quietly wondering if it will be coffee flavored coffee or not, e. fairy just laughs, while the other two wonder what the joke is about. "i need asprin" scorp says. and the rest just laugh. "you should" says fates "that rum did you in!!" "i had some fucked up dream about this town" as scorp decides to tell them everything. "man that is messed up" says fates as she gets out to pump the gas. the gas station is empty and deserted. "im going to get some ( ... )

fatesblood June 20 2006, 05:55:52 UTC

Fates finishes pumping the gas and talks with E. Fairy and Scorp. while they wait for Z to come out of the station... "Z was going to pay for the gas this time around, wasn't she?" Scorp asks. "I don't know.. I thought it was her turn." Fates replies. "It is taking her a long time... I mean come on, how long does it take to get coffee? Maybe she hurt herself with all of her skipping." The girls all laugh.
The sun sets further in the horizon and Fates looks towards the dimly lit station... "I'm gonna go check on her, it's not like her to take this long." Fate smirks... "If we not back in 5 run for the hills..." Scorp and E.Fairy watch Fates walk up to the station and as Fates reaches for the door handle she notices what looks like a bloody hand print on the inside of the door glass, she turns towards the car with an odd look to let the others know something isn't right... They watch her slowly open the door and step inside. E.Fairy and Scorp turn to each other...
Darkness...

scorpionfire July 1 2006, 02:47:59 UTC

all the lights had gone out in the station and surrounding it!! e. fairy let out a yelp/scream. scorp jumped and started taking her pulse! fates stopped motionless in the door way. scorp gets in the car and turns it arround so that the lights shine into the station. fates is still standing in the door way. e. fairy has locked all the doors and punched in 911 into her cell phone ready to push send at any moment. the cd player starts and both girls jump at the sound. they laugh. fates has moved about 3 inches into the store by this time, and is looking arround suspiciously. fates is barely breathing and is trying not to make a sound but there is a smell that is making her sick to her stomach. it was the smell of popcorn popping in the microwave. and there in the corner stood z. looking ridgidly pale and and in disbelief. fates comes up behind her and grabbs her shoulder. z jumps and turns arround to hit whoever was behind her. stopping very short of hitting fates she drops her fist. "what the hell" z asks. fates just looks ( ... )

elementalfairy July 22 2006, 02:05:09 UTC

oh man, that was all it took for thier blood to run cold and for them to stop dead in their tracks. The worst things imaginable ran through their heads. For Z it was giant red eyed denomic rats with razor sharp teeth for the thirst of wires and cables that their favorites... the kind you use to run your computers... ohhhh ohhhh that would be the death of her if she could never ever get to use a computer again. They also love video games so they would chew through them too. yep something about them wires, cables and games they would just love it. That is all she could think of growling. Blackened on the other hand had her own worst fear... denomic, razor toothed, white faced, pycho laughing killer clown named... Mister Jingles. oh that would be her worst nightmare ( ... )