I laughed when Luke compared the family situation of Reid to his own, and then there was this line: “Since the moment your weird messengers showed me the result that wasn’t the question.”
What I enjoy about your writing is how you slowly reveal the relationships between the characters. This was an Ah-ha chapter where some pieces fell into place. The final line hints at where you are going. I hope you are able to post the next chapter soon. :)
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What I enjoy about your writing is how you slowly reveal the relationships between the characters. This was an Ah-ha chapter where some pieces fell into place. The final line hints at where you are going. I hope you are able to post the next chapter soon. :)
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But wait...Ruby is Reid and Katie's daughter? Huh? What? Are they married?
I must read chapter six! You have to straighten this all out in my head...lol.
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