EQUALS 14/?

Oct 28, 2013 19:38

EQUALS…
Author: Scotianova
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amyafa October 28 2013, 19:20:23 UTC
Beautiful. So many emotions.

I love how honest and wise Luke is.

You gave us more insight in Katie's feelings. And shown us that Reid has feelings. About something or someone. I was sad to see him walk out like that.

Maybe next time we will find out what he can't do.

Thank you so much. I love this story.

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scotianova November 3 2013, 09:32:57 UTC
Thank you and yes, I have a very soft spot on Luke in this story :)

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dpracket October 28 2013, 22:12:53 UTC
What can't he do? Reid??? That was a very intimate gesture, and then he's gone. He can't do what? Can't be himself, maybe? Has Reid been in hiding of his true self his whole life? If Reid is in the closet, Luke might be the one to teach him the ways of man on man love, and that thought makes me all giddy. Oh, but then it would be sad too because it would hurt Katie.

This chapter is lovely. There is so much love in this family and of course, a load of relief at Ravi's successful surgery. I understand Luke's feelings, and being emotional after going through a surgical ordeal. And of course Luke is wondering how he'll find a place in Ravi's life, and Reid is understandably worried that Luke will try to assert his parental rights.

I love this story and can't wait to read the next update. :)

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scotianova November 3 2013, 09:36:13 UTC
Luke might be the one to teach him the ways of man on man love...

Luke might teach Reid a few things...

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lurelei October 29 2013, 21:40:20 UTC
So... I wiped my tears. And I raised my glass of hot chocolate (stuffed with marshmellows and a mini milky way - as good as it gets, the cold night's version of champagne...) and then there was that wonderful moment in the hospital, "when Luke smiled in tears and Reid smiled his crooked one and Damian just watched, noticed, apperceived and completed his internal checklist." And then... And then... you build it up and up until Reid says he 'can't do this'. Well - there goes my chocolate-high ;)

Perplex, like Luke. But with a soft smile and a lot of faith. I'm not in a hurry, dear, I'm enjoying this way too much. Take your time, take it slow, no need to rush - I'll be here <3

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scotianova November 3 2013, 09:40:25 UTC
(stuffed with marshmallows and a mini milky way - as good as it gets, the cold night's version of champagne...

when I drink champagne I'm suffering from nettle rash... so I d know a lot of substitutes too :)
My favorite: dark hot chocolate with a pinch of coriander!

About your disappointment: It gets better, promise!

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lurelei November 3 2013, 10:30:18 UTC
'disappointment' is not a word I want to see up here, esp. not as in 'your [= my] disappointment' *takes out red pencil and resolutely crosses that word*

And... *raises eyebrow* ... when did 'perplex' become a synonym for that crossed word?

Hmmm???? *puts hands on hips*

;) Sorry - Moon has test-week at school and things are not going great....

I'll leave you to it, Scotia, but, really - this is so good already, how can it possibly get any better?!?!?!

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scotianova November 3 2013, 15:14:17 UTC
Sometimes I could crawl through www and give you a hug!

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kccalgal October 30 2013, 04:41:51 UTC
And once again you leave me wanting to turn the page to the next chapter. What happens next? I want to know now! Great cliffhanger here.

One thing that intrigued me was the bit of info about DD and mother Oliver. That must play into Liath's story at some point.

And of course the last part with Reid, what was that about?????

You weave an intricate tale and I am loving every minute of it.

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scotianova November 3 2013, 09:41:04 UTC
And once again you leave me wanting to turn the page to the next chapter.

What a wonderful comment - thank you!

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parishs October 30 2013, 09:41:12 UTC
say it Reid, just say it, that you need him in your life as well.
Great story!

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scotianova November 3 2013, 09:41:31 UTC
He says something - very soon!

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