Hey, that's beautiful... heartfelt and moving. You've got a great knack for describing the senses too, there were moments I really felt like I was in that room. The fudge sundaes line also (call me crazy) really struck me. I'm not sure of this poems origins, whether it was fiction or not, but it's an awesome little piece, and you should definately write more :) Thanks for sharing x
alas 'tis not mine, am not sure who its by either, which is why is not credited. it got sent to me in an email once and bought tears to my eyes i do admit. i am dabbling in some guns fic at the moment but have very little time to write, however i will be posting them when they are edited to my satisfaction.
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