Comments | screamingxstar: Existence Is Flawed

screamingxstar

Existence Is Flawed

Sep 01, 2003 12:41

Summary: my whole existence is flawed, you get me closer to god [A.U.][dark/psycho fic] New place, new people, new ways to hide old secrets... Control and deception, two of his favorite things. Control through deception, his mastered art... Lust, hate and lies are all part of the game.
Authors: screamingxstar [chapter 1], tooker [chapter 2], ( Read more... )

Comments 17

__yesterday September 1 2003, 20:38:20 UTC

Holy shit that is fucking amazing. Please continue, i'm intrigued now :)

emapril_showers September 1 2003, 21:30:19 UTC

Hollyyyyyyyyy, I think this needs some reformatting!

You could title each chapter too :)

Lol - there's my constructive criticism ;)

screamingxstar September 1 2003, 22:19:32 UTC

*cracks up* fuckin a, that's what I get for doing it fast. Haha. I'll fix it now. :)

emapril_showers September 1 2003, 22:21:06 UTC

LOL - I would've been scared if it was meant to be that way!

Or would it add to the confusion?! ;)

screamingxstar September 1 2003, 22:23:20 UTC

*coughs* yeah... that's so what it was... to confused people... yeah *looks around*... that's exactly it.

Hahaha ;)

dum_dum_pops September 2 2003, 01:28:51 UTC

absolutely amazing. beautiful, i love it. :) are the chapters being written by different people?

emapril_showers September 2 2003, 09:25:43 UTC

screamingxstar wrote the first chapter
tooker wrote the second
& I wrote the third.

Hope that clears that up for you :)

pervinca September 2 2003, 03:59:26 UTC

The beginning and anonymous puking person both confused me, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter to clear things up. Also, I like your Billy and Tony. :)

moonlights September 3 2003, 03:51:13 UTC

continue, continue! <3

i was wondering about the anonymous puking person at the beginning too but i sort of figured it was billy, for some reason that just seems logical, hahaha.

/me waits for more
/me wonders why i just deleted my last post
/me vows to spend less time in irc

axfadedxpatchx September 23 2003, 16:23:28 UTC

hey, updates will be soon. Sorry it's taken me so long. I have 3 writing classes at school so I've been kind of throwing everything I have into them. But I have free time tonight! So hopefully something will happen. :-D

moonlights September 23 2003, 22:29:07 UTC

YEY!! *dance*

Bleh, school sucks. Three writing classes?! Wow. I couldn't do that, I hate writing anything unless it's on my own time and my own topic for my own purposes (i.e. slash ~_^), then I love that...but I hate writing stories for classes and such >_>