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screamlet February 27 2011, 21:10:06 UTC
Glad it had such an effect! And that you enjoyed, it seems! Thanks for reading!

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jachelle0627 February 25 2011, 04:58:40 UTC
That was a fantastically clever and inventive story (perfect title as well). The switch from Kirk dying in the rock slide to Spock dying totally took me by surprise. I enjoyed reading the different ways the two handled the death of the other even if it made me sad. Thank you for making me happy again with the last part where they both escaped the slide and got to have their first time "thank luck and medicine and the universe (in that order) that you’re alive sex."

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screamlet February 27 2011, 21:10:53 UTC
Thank you so much! It's much appreciated!

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jayj530 February 25 2011, 05:24:32 UTC
So the first part was absolutely heart breaking but when I saw the: Rocks fall; Spock dies., I (out loud; thankfully I'm in my room alone right now) started going "Oh god, oh no, oh god" because I realized I was going to have to go through it all again.

That said, this was excellent. I love how true to the characters it was and how realistic their grief was. And the happy ending was perfect. Thank you for sharing this.

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screamlet February 27 2011, 21:11:17 UTC
Thank you so much for reading!

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katerina_black February 25 2011, 06:06:58 UTC
Holy hell, I think you broke me. That? That was amazing.

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screamlet February 27 2011, 21:11:49 UTC
Haha, thank you for reading!

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gnome781 February 25 2011, 07:26:55 UTC
Ok, that was beautiful and aweful as well as awesome. :) Thank you for such an amazing read! Everyone was organic and beleivable in thier different handling of grief, Kirk's broke my heart, so I thank you for the happy ending!

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screamlet February 27 2011, 21:12:34 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! Glad you held until the end!

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