Storyboarding
Next storyboard!
I'm not as sure about this one. I like the pictures, but I don't really like the setup.
1) Jeff with Deirdre. Skating, training, playing video games, hanging out.
2) TEXT: Jeff spent a lot of time with Deirdre, not just practicing and training for the team.
She spent time trying to get him to take school seriously and him trying to get her to take life less seriously.
In the first one, they're playing video games. I'd like them to be doing something more dynamic than just sitting there playing, but I like it anyway. In the second, Deirdre is getting the puck past Jeff, and he's not happy about it. And in the last one, Jeff is laughing over a movie and eating popcorn while Deirdre is trying to do homework. I think I might want him to be throwing popcorn at her to bug her.
Actually, I might just do this one over, now that I think about it. XD Oh well, tell me if you have any suggestions, bodgei.
I'm not as sure about this one. I like the pictures, but I don't really like the setup.
1) Jeff with Deirdre. Skating, training, playing video games, hanging out.
2) TEXT: Jeff spent a lot of time with Deirdre, not just practicing and training for the team.
She spent time trying to get him to take school seriously and him trying to get her to take life less seriously.
In the first one, they're playing video games. I'd like them to be doing something more dynamic than just sitting there playing, but I like it anyway. In the second, Deirdre is getting the puck past Jeff, and he's not happy about it. And in the last one, Jeff is laughing over a movie and eating popcorn while Deirdre is trying to do homework. I think I might want him to be throwing popcorn at her to bug her.
Actually, I might just do this one over, now that I think about it. XD Oh well, tell me if you have any suggestions, bodgei.