Fic: What the Captain Saw

[scriberestagere]

Title: What the Captain Saw
Author: Scribere Est Agere
Pairing: Goren/Eames
Spoilers: Up through Season 8
Rating: A
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me.

Summary: My name is Danny Ross. This is my story.

Written for tooraf, in the l_and_o_santa Christmas Challenge.

Comments

[leigh57]

You know? Your writing makes me so happy, even when it makes me so sad, which it usually does. I've never seen a full episode of this show, but I still swoon when you write beautiful fanfic like this. I love the tone of the entire story, but just a few things that I thought were extra cool:

This: He staggered around drunkenly as if he hadn’t slept, hadn’t eaten - which he most likely hadn’t - rumpled and creased and twitching like he’d downed ten cups of coffee, which he most likely had.

This: I often felt they were carrying on complicated and yet completely silent conversations with the mere tilt of the head, the blink of an eye. Oh, eye convos. I heart them so hard.

This: I swear they could find each other in a room of thousands in a nanosecond. Just. Squee!

Also, the end totally made me do that throat lumpy thing, so GAH. I love it when you write longer stories. I just DO. And I love you. The end.

[scriberestagere]

Hello, virtual stranger! I love getting feedback from you because I'm always blown away when you take the time to read fanfic for a show you never watch, ha ha! Thanks so much, sweet cheeks :) I had fun writing this one, and it's hard to believe it will all be over soon. Sigh. I think it airs again in March, and apparently "someone" will die. I hope hope hope it's Ross :D

How's your show going??

Love you, too :)

[leigh57]

Hee I assume you must have missed my latest LJ post. But that explains how my show is going. You're still alive! I thought maybe you'd vanished!

Nice icon.

[scriberestagere]

Lol -- I did miss it. Oops. Haven't been on here in ages. I'm assuming someone either died or...well, who the fuck knows in glorious TV-land :D One of CI's characters will be offed next month. Wheee!

[scriberestagere]

Lol, I'm no Ross lover either, but if he can keep Eames/Goren from biting the big one, I'm his biggest fan EVAR :D Thank you so very much for the wonderful feedback :)

[daystarsearcher]

Love this. Ross has such a weird relationship with them; you capture that odd mix of possessiveness/protectiveness/jealousy/caring he has going on so well. And so beautifully written. The bits after 'Blind Spot' and 'Purgatory' squeezed my heart in a little iron band, and oh jealous!Bobby from 'Lady's Man.' So adorable.

[scriberestagere]

Thank you! Thank you :) I've never liked Ross the way I did Deakins, but as I've mentioned, if his death prevents Goren or Eames from kicking off, I'm aaaaalll for it :D Have I mentioned lately how much I loved your story?

Just checkin'.

[daystarsearcher]

Aw, now you're making me blush. :)

[fundere]

Loved this...in spite of Ross... ;) I totally agree with your notion that I will HAVE to love him if he takes it for Goren & Eames. One of them ceasing to exist... well, that is just to much to contemplate.

Please, please post something new... today even. March 30th is so very far away and yet, being the end so much to soon...

Thank you.

[scriberestagere]

Ahhh....post something new. Sigh. I have this story that I've been working on, literally, for two years. I don't know what to do with it anymore.

And I just really really really don't want Eames to die, even though I think she won't. I'll just die...if she does.