Law & Order 100 Challenge -- "Baby It's Cold Outside"

Dec 13, 2010 00:12

Title: Winter Light (5)
Author: Scribere Est Agere
Pairing: Goren/Eames
Rating: G
Word Count: 106

startled, shivering )

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scriberestagere December 13 2010, 19:21:15 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'm happy to oblige. Thanks for the lovely feedback :)

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daystarsearcher December 13 2010, 13:12:36 UTC
The second sentence here is actually my favorite, the way it captures that bright jarring eye-wateriness of winter, the distortion of perception.

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scriberestagere December 13 2010, 19:22:02 UTC
Thank you! I love it when readers pick out actual favourite words/sentences. Makes it all worthwhile <3

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gidget_zb December 13 2010, 13:29:24 UTC
I always hate drabbles ( like real actual 100 word ones lol) but I always read yours becaus ethey are my exception to the rule. I do not know how you do it - because I couldn't write a sentence with a hundred words lol, but you manage to convey so much emotion and meaning and even a bit of plot, like how is that even possible?!

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scriberestagere December 13 2010, 19:24:46 UTC
Ah, man. You're making me all googly and squishy with your wonderful words. Seriously. So very much appreciated, especially right now. I just love these two wholeheartedly, and this writing is so therapeutic. But your feedback is even better <3

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hargiteam_43 December 13 2010, 21:45:46 UTC
Aww, this is an amazing little series and it makes me want to write fanfic instead of finishing my papers :P I'm so glad to see you popping back up on my f-list again. <3

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scriberestagere December 13 2010, 22:22:31 UTC
Thank you so much :) Write! Write fanfic, please! It's ever so much fun! I'm happy to be back posting, and hope to have more very soon.

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surreallis December 14 2010, 08:37:29 UTC
Oh, these are all fantastic. And they made me feel the cold all the more, but also Bobby's heat. I didn't count words, but I kind of assume that you probably took on the challenge of staying true to the 100 word rule, which is all the more impressive.

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scriberestagere December 14 2010, 15:23:53 UTC
Thank you :):) I'm so fucking cold right now I can barely type this. We are in a deep freeze up here, and these two make me feel a little bit warmer. And, lol, I did try to stick to the 100-word rule, though I went a bit over on each one ;-)

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