Fic: No Sudden Movements

[scriberestagere]

Title: No Sudden Movements
Author: Scribere Est Agere
Pairing: Goren/Eames
Spoilers: After Loyalty
Rating: M
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me.

Summary: We were always saying goodbye.

Comments

[scriberestagere]

THANK YOU. Seriously. I appreciate it so very much. I love these two unhealthily, but I don't even care. I'm going to wallow in my unhealthy love and keep torturing them for as long as possible! Yee haw!
<3

[alicat713]

I totally thought you were going to go with these lines:

I have studied the tight curls on the back of your neck
moving away from me
beyond anger or failure
your face in the evening schools of longing
through mornings of wish and ripen
we were always saying goodbye
in the blood in the bone over coffee
before dashing for elevators going
in opposite directions
without goodbyes.

So imagine my surprise when you took the angstiest (is that a word? -it is now) ending of a poem ever and turned it into an angsty-yet-happiest-ending story!

I love you to bits. I am keeping optimistic thoughts for you (actually, I pray, but I know - ya know, not everyone appreciates that, so.) and I know you and I are both strong enough to come out the other side of our life-changing crapfests whole and healthy people. And maybe I'll never love another person like my husband again - who can say - but I get words like these imparted on my soul and it's almost as good as a warm body next to me. Yeah, you're that good of a writer. Don't forget that.

[scriberestagere]

Lol. Those were the lines I started with, definitely. Weird. I'm not even sure what happened, but by the end, the last lines of the poem had found their way into the story. What a gorgeous poem, though, and thank you ever so much for sharing it with me :) I love you, too, and I'm thinking (praying is great, if you can, you know, DO it) of you a lot, and hoping you're coping and getting through this really annoying difficult time of year :D I wish I loved my husband as much as you love yours: it would help make sense of what's happened a bit more, I think. Maybe not. I don't even know anymore. Thanks for the wonderful feedback -- it means more than you know <3

[scriberestagere]

Thank YOU. Seriously. I'm so happy to be writing again. Glad you haven't forgotten me :)

[gidget_zb]

Omg omg omg. So I am waiting OVER A YEAR for a post-Lyalty fic from you and then - and then I fucking MISS it. What the actual fuck? I blame the holidays and omg. I was just reccing your fic to another G/E fan over on Tumblr, and I came here to look up the link and THANK GOD I DID.

So good. Omg the repeated dialog throughout? OMG. And the set-up in the warehouse and how we find out with Bobby and omg, omg, omg.

That? Was amazing. Just so you know. AMAZING.

[scriberestagere]

Lol. Sorry it took me SO LONG. And I'm so pleased you like :) I also write one just before this: Fine Lines. It's here in my LJ and on ff.net, as well, if you're looking for yet another post-Loyalty fic :D

And THANK YOU, really, for your very kind words <3