LJ Idol Week 3: It's a Trap

Nov 19, 2010 18:14

September 2003-I am speeding down a two-lane New Jersey highway on a tandem bicycle, quite literally a bicycle built for two. My bike captain Ed, who is doing the steering, occupies the seat in front of me. We have been on the road for nearly six hours today and have covered nearly 75 miles. The trees lining the road part for a moment, and I can ( Read more... )

writing, ljidol

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team_jessie November 22 2010, 01:40:39 UTC
Very nicely done! I felt like I was there with you!

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scriblesnbraile November 29 2010, 00:54:29 UTC
Thank you!

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gaea_rising November 22 2010, 01:54:55 UTC
I particularly loved and related to the music and your depiction of it is perfect. Well done!

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scriblesnbraile November 29 2010, 00:55:44 UTC
Thank you! There is just something magical about music.

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dreamingaspen November 22 2010, 18:23:24 UTC
I really enjoyed this piece.

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scriblesnbraile November 29 2010, 00:56:29 UTC
Thank you.

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fortitudehigh November 23 2010, 22:43:16 UTC
Two very different types of exhilaration - both easy to feel through your writing.

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scriblesnbraile November 29 2010, 00:58:02 UTC
Thank you!

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