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Sep 24, 2006 20:08

I'm skirting the deadline here I know, dontcha just love living on the edge? ;)
Title: As Daylight Fades
Author: empress_izzy
Pairing: Sparrington (written for the Sparringtonfest at scruffy_love)
Rating: PG
Beta: Unfortunately un-beta-ed.
Phrase prompt
#23: James is definitely going to kill him this time (sort of)
#44: Want, Take, Have.
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Comments 6

greenmtnboy18 September 24 2006, 19:06:22 UTC

LOL! Oh my, that was *delightful*! I hate deathfic. I loved this. *eg*

empress_izzy September 26 2006, 17:43:17 UTC

I tend to balk at deathfics too. I didn't even mean to make this one. XD

I'm glad it overcame your aversion for this once!

vintage__cherry September 24 2006, 20:31:04 UTC

wow!
XD Jack wispering lewed things.

However, he had not counted on being hemmed in by a wired, vengeful pirate who
had no scruples about whispering lewd nothings into his ear to steal his peace of
mind, and make him forget what he meant to say.

Ending was perfect.

estelendur September 25 2006, 00:40:40 UTC

Thoughts at the beginning: Oh no! Deathfic!

Thoughts at the end: *evil grin* Eeheehee. XD

empress_izzy September 26 2006, 17:46:38 UTC

I wonder why we don't like death fic, but it's evil, really. Thank you!

anonymiss731 April 25 2007, 02:29:57 UTC

Bravo! This is the first (and probably only) deathfic which I love!!! I've read deathfic that I regretfully liked because it was written well but the death part and dripping angst always ruins it. This however has the best plot and balance of emotion I've ever seen in deathfic and in quite a few genres to be honest. I loved the descriptions as well the pickpocket hands and tense posture were my favs. Oh and the Jesus mention fit in surprisingly and amazingly well. *claps and bows* It's all incredibly well done!