Travel

[scubamatt]

Bus terminals are always such melancholy places. With so many partings on the verge of happening and most folks, even those with their best beloved, just wanting to get on with it and start the journey but forced to stand in an unsightly line, locked in limbo. Young couples cling to each other, speaking close and holding on for those last few

Comments

Not Haikus

[anglerfish]

You're missing syllables in the middle line of the first one and the last line of the second one.

Re: Not Haikus

[xocet]

Blue Sky, Open Road
Communal Solitudeness
Restless Adventure

Ice, silt, reeds, ripples,
Excitement, Exploration:
That's a flooded ditch.

Re: Not Haikus

[anglerfish]

Solidtudeness?? Honestly? Ridiculous.

As for Cote, I don't care how you try to pronounce it, ditch has one syllable.

Re: Not Haikus

[xocet]

It was a joke, sheesh.