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tracys_dream May 26 2014, 08:26:11 UTC
Excellent story! I read it twice. :)

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scullspeare May 27 2014, 03:19:14 UTC
Thank you!! Thank you!! :-)

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reggie11 May 26 2014, 09:45:48 UTC
Fabulous outsider POV, I really liked Dan, and your character voices were absolutely spot on. I've so missed the guys falling all over themselves to protect the other; this is the Supernatural I fell in love with.

I love how you used a real place for the case to take place. Danvers' history is incredibly creepy so it fit so well.

That pie/cake thing is without a doubt one of the grossest foods I've seen in a while, second only to pizza cake!

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scullspeare May 27 2014, 03:22:10 UTC
I love the outsider POV too; it's nice to have a character who can see all the reasons we all fell in love with the Winchester boys almost a decade ago. (Eek! A decade. It's hard to believe, isn't it?)

As for the Cherpumple - there's no way I could make that up. My imagination's not that good. :-/

Thanks so much!!

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trishabooms May 26 2014, 15:14:41 UTC
That was excellent and would make a brilliant episode!
Thank you for a really enjoyable read.

I recc'd this on my LJ, hope you don't mind.

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scullspeare May 27 2014, 03:23:44 UTC
Mind? I'm very flattered. Thank you!!!! The rec is very much appreciated, and I'm thrilled you enjoyed the fic. Cheers!

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argentine65 May 26 2014, 17:51:47 UTC
Wonderful story and amazing characters. Thank you very much for sharing. Martha

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scullspeare May 27 2014, 03:25:13 UTC
Thanks so much, Martha, for that lovely feedback! It made my day. Cheers!

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madebyme_x May 27 2014, 12:03:31 UTC
Such a captivating fic and a pleasure to read! There's nothing better than a well written outsider POV, and you nailed it!

I loved seeing both the boys pushing their own individual pain aside for their brother. Oh the feels!!

The banter, the casefic, and those yummy details were just perfectly executed. I loved every single word.

Thanks for sharing. Take care, :)

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scullspeare May 28 2014, 12:39:22 UTC
Thanks so much, my friend!

Writing the boys bickering is fun. Fighting?
Not so much. And the Winchester boys having each others' back is a big reason we all fell in love with this show, right?

It's lovely to hear you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for the gentle encouragement along the way to get it done. That was much needed and much appreciated. Cheers

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