How to Brighten a House in Three Easy Steps, pg, Leslie/Ben

May 15, 2013 10:47

How to Brighten a House in Three Easy Steps, pg
1500 words
AU (in that they don't buy a house, they live in Leslie's house, the end.)
Leslie/Ben, Parks and Recreation

"Maybe she’s making this into a bigger deal than it is. Maybe. Probably."

Thanks/Notes: Thanks to Dennis for the read through. I wanted them arguing over something, but not over ( Read more... )

fic: ben&leslie, fanfiction: parks and recreation

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c00kie May 15 2013, 15:32:21 UTC
There's a quiet realness in this that I really like. There's no dramatics, no needless angst, it's just a good solid piece of writing about a couple having the most common argument couples have and it's lovely.

And super love for the imagery of this sentence, When she walks to him, it’s like a robot, a dejected robot, all creaky, rusted joints.

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scullyseviltwin May 20 2013, 14:24:52 UTC
I don't know why I so much want to put these two characters through the ringer but. Meh. I just want them to be more REAL to me.

Blah, they're so pretty together, I just...

Heh, that was my favorite bit, actually.

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shornt May 16 2013, 00:33:22 UTC
UGH I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE ANGST WITH THEM ITS ALWAYS SO GOOD. Is this meant to be an AU with them moving into her house tho? WHO CARES SHOWERS TOGETHER FOR EVERYONE

(wait no not for everyone only them)

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scullyseviltwin May 20 2013, 14:22:57 UTC
Yeah, I just marked it as AU. Whe I was writing it this was fun but man, rereading this I was like... meh, totally not them, I suck, etc. BUT WHEN COURTNEY GETS HERE. PERHAPS WE WILL WATCH A LOT OF PARKS AND I SHALL BE INSPIRED.

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bowlsohard May 18 2013, 19:45:47 UTC
Yes we did!!!

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scullyseviltwin May 20 2013, 14:29:21 UTC
YOU ARE ALL SO NICE I CAN'T EVEN DEAL!

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scullyseviltwin May 20 2013, 14:26:41 UTC
I want them having fights, like REAL fights... for us to see. Like Ann and Leslie's fight! But that would be too much. For now I'll have to be content with putting them through the ringer myself.

Thank YOU for being so lovely and reading this! I'VE MISSED WRITING THEM AND INTERACTING WITH ALL OF YOUR LOVELIES OUTSIDE OF TUMBLR! AHHHH!

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