Evening Shadows, for Calantha

May 27, 2007 02:52

Title: Evening Shadows
Author: Settiai
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~2700
Recipient: Calantha / calantha42
Spoilers: Absolutely none. In fact, I'm not even sure when the story's set other than "while Carter's a major."
Prompt: "A story in which they must fight their way out of situation rather than come up with the ideas and solutions."
Thanks: Many thanks to non_canon for ( Read more... )

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scifithinker December 15 2008, 23:31:09 UTC
I just wanted it to be longer...

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settiai December 16 2008, 01:20:38 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it. :)

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samantilles December 16 2008, 00:37:09 UTC
Now I'm curious... if the gun immediately cauterizes the wound, is Daniel then left with a gaping burn hold in his thigh?? is it fixable??

I think you really nailed the concept that sometimes Daniel does what he needs to, and while he doesn't particularly like killing others, when it is kill or be killed, usually he's for the killing. He's not as self sacrificing all the time as he's made out to be sometimes ((he is self sacrificing once in a while, just not every single time he turns around)

great job!

(brought here by sg_fignewton's rec at stargateficrec)

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settiai December 16 2008, 01:21:35 UTC
Thanks for taking the time to comment. *smile* I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.

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amilyn December 17 2008, 02:45:05 UTC
Very nice. I like the tension in the room, the tempting of fate, Daniel being the most observant of the little things and taking the shot he had to, Sam going from scientist to soldier as needed in the blink of an eye...

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settiai December 17 2008, 02:51:07 UTC
I'm glad that you liked the story. :)

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