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Together Closely Lie for Kellifer_fic

May 21, 2007 20:02

TITLE: Together Closely Lie
AUTHOR: Mara
RATING: PG-13
SPOILERS: Takes place mid-season 7
RECIPIENT: kellifer_ficCATEGORY: Romance, humor, drama ( Read more... )

Comments 25

abyssinia4077 May 30 2007, 22:19:06 UTC

This whole story was lovely. I liked their discussion on whether to do it and how easy it was for Daniel to adjust - given his past experiences. I *loved* Jack's reaction, and their reaction to his reaction and the symbiote voices and banter with their hosts and Daniel's analytically cataloguing what it was like to host were all so good.

I also really liked Teal'c - Daniel seeking him out to talk and him "guarding" them as they searched for new hosts (and hee :) on the first set being unacceptable) and the other Tok'ra's reactions.

And the end - with them both having discussed it with their symbiotes and the awkward conversation and the understanding and the "how do we tell Jack?" - priceless!

So good!

marag May 31 2007, 00:08:43 UTC

Thank you! This story gave me some trouble, but I'm so glad people have enjoyed it :)

advection June 3 2007, 05:10:30 UTC

What a wonderful fic and a wonderful response to the prompt! It covers so many interesting questions, and has so many funny lines, and so much great Jack and Teal'c too. I was happy that Sam and Daniel were left to deal with their own genuine feelings for each other together after the Tok'ra had moved on to new hosts -- this was a lovely way to catalyze it, but I was left feeling very sure that their feelings weren't spillover from the Tok'ra's feelings. And I really liked Treena and Marek and was very happy that they found the right people to share themselves with. This is just way cool all around.

marag June 3 2007, 13:21:06 UTC

Thank you! I wasn't sure what I was going to do with this prompt, but once I started writing, things kept occurring to me :)

rigel_7 September 21 2007, 15:30:27 UTC

Tokra fic! Huzzah!

And it was absolutely lovely :D

Your take on the prompt was really well done, Marek and Treena were great characters and their interactions with Daniel and Sam were great.

So much love for Teal'c and his ability to read Daniel like a book as well.

marag September 22 2007, 02:22:31 UTC

Thanks, I'm very glad you liked it! This isn't a story I ever thought I'd write, but I'm rather pleased with it :)