Hello, I Love You, Won't You Tell Me Your Name

May 21, 2007 17:26

Title:Hello, I Love You, Won't You Tell Me Your Name ( Read more... )

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aurora_novarum May 22 2007, 03:57:32 UTC
"You know that sound is very reassuring," Sam said very quietly.

"What sound?" Daniel asked.

"The sound of your heart beating. There have been too many times when it was silent," Sam said through tears that were forming in her eyes and throat.

Aw. I think this was my favorite part. But having Sam step in the ice cream was a nice humorous touch. :-)

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maevebran May 22 2007, 05:49:16 UTC
Thanks. (I had to do something with the ice cream and Sam doesn't strike me as one to deliberately put on him so an fun with it had to be accidental.)=)

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simallyher May 23 2007, 15:38:43 UTC
I have to agree this is my favourite part as well :)

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maevebran May 23 2007, 22:42:37 UTC
I'm glad you like it.

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jessm78 May 22 2007, 16:41:59 UTC
Oh, I loved this!! I agree with aurora_novarum... that part about Daniel's heart beating is so sweet. :) Loved the hurt/comfort as Daniel talks about remembering what happened to Sha're, and I like how he teases Sam about lying to him when she says he's slept over and has some clothes there.

I was LOL when Sam stepped in the ice cream. Doesn't seem to be a huge misfortune, though (*fantasizes about Daniel licking ice cream off her toes*). ;) Love the ending too! Thanks so much for the cool story, Maeve! :)

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maevebran May 22 2007, 21:49:57 UTC
You're very welcome. I wasn't sure if you'd like it since there was no real plot.=)

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jessm78 May 25 2007, 00:57:10 UTC
Nope, that's entirely fine with me. :) Mine had no real plot either, lol

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maevebran May 23 2007, 04:20:39 UTC
Thank you. I thought Daniel would pick up on the discrepencey between what she told him on Vis Uban and what she was telling him now.=)

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abyssinia4077 May 31 2007, 21:37:02 UTC
Aw :) I loved the heart beat snippet - totally made me melt.

And Sam stepped in the ice cream :)

This was sweet.

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maevebran June 1 2007, 00:38:12 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.=)

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advection June 3 2007, 14:14:01 UTC
I'm sick of remembering tragedies -- Oh, ow. But the sweetness is a lovely comfort. :-)

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maevebran June 3 2007, 22:24:59 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

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