Oooh, I love the edginess and bleakness of this -- it makes what's between them feel very real, and the emotional nuances grabbed me hard, in the way that if I weren't reading it on a screen I'd say I couldn't put it down. Really engaging take on them, and at a time in the show that's so important but so ... vague, somehow, hard to get a handle on. This gives me a handle on it; thank you.
Great take on how damaged they both are, how damaged the life they've shared for the last eight years has made them, and how, hopefully, they can now start healing.
I got so invested in this that I wanted to warn them about what was coming... *g*
Anyway, Sam and Daniel are both horribly damaged people and I wish that the writers had addressed this in the last two seasons, but alas, this is why fanfiction is so effing awesome.
Ooooh bitter edged S/D - I have a sekrit love for this kind of fic, where it's not all roses and kittens and there's a great deal of baggage and angsty feeling.
Nicely done, especially the sparse and terse dialogue between them.
Thank you! I have to believe that any relationship between Sam and Daniel ( at this point) would be complicated and maybe a little messy...and yes, Vala and Jack on the periphery. :)
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Thanks for your kind comments...I'm glad you liked it!
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I got so invested in this that I wanted to warn them about what was coming... *g*
(here from _minxy_'s rec, btw)
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Anyway, Sam and Daniel are both horribly damaged people and I wish that the writers had addressed this in the last two seasons, but alas, this is why fanfiction is so effing awesome.
Thanks for reading!
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Nicely done, especially the sparse and terse dialogue between them.
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