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Fic: Jumping In; PG13; S/D

May 22, 2007 17:25

Title: Jumping In
Author: Triciabyrne1978Email: TriciaByrne1978@gmail.com ( Read more... )

Comments 20

qzee May 23 2007, 07:55:20 UTC

very cute! I like poor Daniel's embarrassment in Victoria Secret. Poor guy! *pats him*

triciabyrne1978 May 23 2007, 11:53:45 UTC

I'm very glad that you enjoyed it!

I had a lot of fun writing him in this.

zorb May 26 2007, 19:07:12 UTC

If this was your first S/D, it didn't show - you did a great job capturing the post-"Fallen" feel that I love to read in fics. I loved Daniel's fixation on the Victoria's bag, and Sam's glee in throwing him off. It was sweet and satisfying. Great job!

triciabyrne1978 May 26 2007, 19:41:46 UTC

Yes, while I've read the pair for a while this was my first attempt at writing it.

Thanks so much!

Glad you enjoyed it!

sg_fignewton May 29 2007, 13:00:38 UTC

Oh... very nice. Very sweet. Very them!

triciabyrne1978 May 29 2007, 13:01:53 UTC

TY!

advection June 23 2007, 22:27:34 UTC

Aw, very sweet and very charming. Got a fun chuckle from the line about Daniel being in hell, poor guy. *g* Enjoyed! :-)

jessm78 July 4 2007, 21:14:27 UTC

Aww, this was so sweet. I have to say, I couldn't even tell that it was your first S/D fic. You captured their relationship so well, especially for that time period. Poor Daniel wanting to flee from Victoria's Secret, yet he cannot get his mind off of what could be in the bag (Sam must have loved that).

I especially like how, at the very end, you have Daniel acknowledging that their relationship is changing and how he's open to it, but the level of comfort is still there.

Great job! :)

triciabyrne1978 July 4 2007, 21:20:02 UTC

Thanks SO much!

I'm very glad that you enjoyed it.