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[Fic] Lightly, Love

Jun 30, 2011 11:16

Title: Lightly, Love.
Author: lil_1337
Pairing/Characters: Quatre, mention of Trowa and Duo
Rating: G
Word count: 457
Warnings/Kinks: High School AU, schemeing!Quatre
Summary: For the gw500 prompt fish.
Disclaimer: I am owned by cats, but sadly I do not own any Quats.

( In Spring... )

quatre winner

Comments 4

kelkatan July 1 2011, 04:03:00 UTC

How sweet! It's so poetic and the flow is almost as dreamy as Quatre's thoughts.

Favorite line:

The grass was lush underfoot and a slight, but steady breeze ruffled the tops of the trees like the hand of an affectionate uncle.

Oh yeah. Just like that.

lil_1337 July 1 2011, 04:08:03 UTC

*blushes* Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

dentelle_noir July 2 2011, 15:55:13 UTC

He had plans, schemes and, most importantly, dreams.

The rhyme and flow of this, and others, was just beautiful! The tone of the fic really matched the gentle flow of the wind from the first line. Beautifully done!

lil_1337 July 2 2011, 19:35:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.