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Lunch Box Blues
Sep 16, 2008 14:35
No more kisses on the cheek from now on, I heard (
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producer_09765
September 21 2008, 06:14:02 UTC
hiya poops
I really like the repetition of "I heard." Kinda brings up a sort of uncertainty, maybe even something that is ouut of your control this is def an example of a shorter one that hits the mark
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mr. J
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se7en1113
September 21 2008, 17:39:34 UTC
mistah J! thanks :) should i put more time into it? maybe edit? Lol.
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I really like the repetition of "I heard." Kinda brings up a sort of uncertainty, maybe even something that is ouut of your control this is def an example of a shorter one that hits the mark
love
mr. J
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