Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 4 (Asami/Akihito)

[sea_priest3ss]

Title: Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 4: Asami’s surprise
Author: priestess_grrrl
Series: Viewfinder
Pairing: AsamixAkihito
Rating: R-ish for being pr0n-ish
Genre: drama with a side order of crack. Lots of drama this chappie.

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Comments

[mssupafan]

lol...LOVE this!!

OMG! The Asami's description of Aki holding the gun that excited him so much was freakin' HAWT..*drools* And I Loved that fact that the only place he wanted to be was at that particular spot with Aki.

Great background on how Asami was after Aki was kidnapped. Somehow I can see him like that..somewhat. lol

I'm glad Asami came clean about the baby to Aki (or has he really?). Now I hope we get to find out who the mother is.

I can't wait until you update again!! *goes back to reread*

[sea_priest3ss]

Thank you! Yeah, I loved writing that bit with the gun. Those two are so hot sometimes, it's just like...! *fans self* It's great fun to write. Thanks for commenting; more soon! ^_^

[kawaii_kawaii]

That line about Asami can have tempura ice cream was REAlLY VERY ABSOLUTELY EXCEEDINGLY CUTE XD XD Ah ~~~ Very nice, very romantic, very cute ... Oh the cuteness is killing me XD
Please write more soon ^^

[sea_priest3ss]

Thank you! Yeah, I thought I'd go for a bit of romance there, even though it's exceedingly fangirlish... but we are fangirls, after all! Thanks for reading; more soon! ^_^

[tailor3141]

awww problem resolved. haha i love aki's last lines. poor aki, with the whole asami went whoring around...how sad. but still, at least they aren't arguing any more!!
thanks!!

[sea_priest3ss]

Thank you! Well, problem resolved for the time being, anyway. More to come! Thanks for reading! ^_^

[sakura27]

I really liked their confrontation. And I can't wait to see where the story is going! Nice fic!

[sea_priest3ss]

Thank you! More coming soon! ^_^

[inksheddings]

God, I really need to catch up on Viewfinder. I have Volumes one and two, but I haven't read farther than that and it seems I've missed quite a bit.

I love this story! I'm having soooooo much fun reading it.

[sea_priest3ss]

Wow, you have vol 2? Hold on to that. It's worth a shit ton of money right now. I managed to get vol 1, but someone on my f-list paid $150 for 2 and 3. I have 2-4 in Japanese because I couldn't get them any other way. I guess Be Beautiful or whatever doesn't carry it anymore, and there was some blah blah blah wank, so right now she doesn't have an American distributor (for VF anyway. Crimson Spell and A Foreign Love Affair are available). So yeah, hold on to that sucker...! And club_sion will get you the rest, nice and scanlated.

Thanks, honey, I'm glad you're enjoying the story...! ^_^

[osterpr]

Should I be a total meanie and tell you I have vol. 1, 2 and 3 in English and I bought them at the regular price? Yes, it was a crap night at work so I need to be a little mean.