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sea_priest3ss

Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 5

Jul 05, 2008 21:48

Title: Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 5: Feilong’s good evening
Author: priestess_grrrl
Series: Viewfinder
Pairing: none this chapter
Rating: PG-13
Genre: drama with a side order of crack
Notes: Feilong shops at Little Buddha Baby, except imagine everything is three times as expensive. Yes, they really do have a Lil' Empress onesie.

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Comments 61

randrews25 July 6 2008, 02:11:35 UTC

Awesome detailing!
you write very well, i envy your writing style ^__^
great update and more soon
i'm anxious to know who's baby it is!!!

sea_priest3ss July 7 2008, 03:29:21 UTC

Thank you very much! Yes, little Kokoro is quite the mystery. More soon! Thanks so much for reading! ^_^

mssupafan July 6 2008, 02:28:31 UTC

Yay!! an update! ^_^

I just love all the descriptions of the outfits Fei was purchasing for cute little Kokoro.. hehe.

Love the prostitution reminiscing and the time Fei's brother made his taste all his food. Great!

I cannot wait to see what's next!

sea_priest3ss July 7 2008, 03:31:55 UTC

Thank you! Tee hee, I loved thinking up outfits for Kokoro. How much fun, to have all the money in the world to spend on a baby...! And yes, I have no love for Yantsui, so making him even more evil was an easy task. *fumes fangirlishly* More soon! Thanks for reading! ^_^

usersauba July 6 2008, 02:32:40 UTC

I'm glad to see an update because I was starting to wonder whether or not you've abandoned it :)
Anyway, with pearls in his hair and statement like this: “Don’t we look pretty, Mommy’s little Xin-xin!” how can Fei Long possibly called Akihito girly?

kurosaki9 July 6 2008, 03:53:24 UTC

Fei Long is in another world. Akihito being girly? phff, please... i laughed when Fei Long said “Don’t we look pretty, Mommy’s little Xin-xin!” it was funny cause i could picture them now...

sea_priest3ss July 7 2008, 03:36:18 UTC

Oh no, I am definitely planning to continue! RL just gets in the way sometimes. I'm afraid LJ's pace is a little too fast for me.

hahaha, yeah, Feilong calling anyone girly is pretty much the pot and the proverbial kettle, but I don't think he really gets it... *giggles* Anyway, thanks for reading, more (hopefully) soon! ^_^

ekaterin24 July 8 2008, 13:48:40 UTC

IMHO, LJ's pace is too fast for anyone who has a reasonable RL (such as those of us with jobs, kids, strong commitment to academia (as opposed to squeaking by at college), etc.

mammarella July 6 2008, 03:09:10 UTC

this is SO precious! :)
Thank you! :)

sea_priest3ss July 7 2008, 03:37:40 UTC

You're welcome, and thanks so much! More soon! ^_^

kurosaki9 July 6 2008, 03:54:24 UTC

awww, i could picture Fei Long walking down the street with tao and Kokoro. Its a nice picture but a weird one at that. Anyways, thx for the update and hope you update soon...

sea_priest3ss July 12 2008, 01:09:49 UTC

Yeah, I could just imagine Feilong walking down my street with Tao and Kokoro, in his pearls...! I think everyone would die of shock. (Come to think of it, I don't think I've ever seen any Chinese guy in my neighborhood, ever, nevermind one as sexy as Feilong. Damn the suburbs...!)

Thanks, I'll be working on the next update...! ^_^