Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 9

[sea_priest3ss]

Title: Three Yakuza and a Baby, Chapter 9: A mother's secret
Author: priestess_grrrl
Series: Viewfinder, which belongs to the wonderful Yamane-sensei, not me.
Pairing: AsamixAkihito
Rating: NC-17, warnings for bondage, violence, het (of the Aki-molesting variety)
Notes: For those of you who may not know, Kokoro means "heart". Sorry for the long delay; I've

Comments

[yaoi_mania]

OMG! His daughter... Asami has a daughter!!!
Oh~ the suspence, can't wait for the next chapter!

[sea_priest3ss]

Tee hee, thank you! Yes, it's Asami's day for surprises. I will try my best to not take so long in between chapters. Thanks for reading! ^_^

[cherokee1]

I was just thinking about this story! So glad you updated.
Wasn't Tokyo Rose the propaganda radio announcer during WW2?
The one responsible for trying to tear down the morale of the Allies.
Of course there was more than one girl broadcasting...
C

[yudashin]

When I read that part, I also thought of the same.

[gen50]

yes. that's what i thought

[sea_priest3ss]

Thank you! Yes, that's where I borrowed the name... it also happens to be the name of a popular vibrator. ^_~

Thanks so much for reading...! ^_^

[yudashin]

Great chapter!! Want to read more! Hope you'll update soon.

[sea_priest3ss]

Thanks, honey! Hope you are well. I will try to update soon...! ^_^

[ekaterin24]

Wow! This kicks ass!

I love the attitude of the head prostitute. She's absolutely right, of course, about their position and, as I don't have to tell you, so many times about women & men in general.

Love Asami and Feilong's reactions. And Akihito as the one who is sort of on both sides because of his history.

You've done it again--another brilliant, meaningful story that's also true-to-character and hot as a blast furnace. Speaking of which, this part is sooooo utterly hot:
...suddenly Asami was all around him, and he was coming hard into his strong hand, and crying just as hard. “A-Asami…!”

[sea_priest3ss]

Awww, I love your comments, Hikaru! *snuggles*

Yes, I do feel like Aki has a unique POV here, and maybe he can even help caveman!Asami (as someone commented a few chappies ago) to have a little more compassion as well.

Tee hee, thanks...! I couldn't resist having Asami coming in (hahaha) just at the right time... Only in fanfic, of course, but once the idea got in my head I just had to put it in there. I kept thinking, what kind of entrance would Asami make... guns ablazing? drop from the ceiling? send Fei in first with his Kung Fu? Or WAIT - come in smexing FTW! ^_^

Thanks, honey! More soon, hopefully! ^_^

[ekaterin24]

Yess!!! Come in smexing for the win!!

[5123]

wow...i didn't see.....ah.....wow... that's.....wow....whoa!

[sea_priest3ss]

Tee hee! Thanks! I'll try to update soon so I don't leave you all hanging! Thanks so much for reading...! ^_^