A Little Rain

Apr 03, 2011 16:01

Pairing: Jonghyun/Minho
Rating: pg-13, swearing
Genre: fluff/romance
Summary: Jonghyun get's moody in the spring and Minho is the only one who knows how to handle him.
Author's Note: I haven't been in the zone lately at all but I got hit with this idea when I was staring out my window [Seattle, always raining. It's definitely not a myth]. But yeah. it' ( Read more... )

pairing: jonghyun/minho, !fic

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shineesbright April 6 2011, 02:27:15 UTC
This has totally turned me into mush, so brace yourself for incoherent ramblings…
One of the many reasons why I love your fics, n this particular JongHo, is that you’ve incorporated so much of their real personalities (and situations) into the story that this relationship seems quite plausible. For example:

“Always so collected and strong in the face of change. Always ready for anything and the younger had basically been assured a position at his father's law firm after grad. Something Minho was comfortable with and understood already. Just thinking of it made his stomach twist. An odd cocktail of jealousy and self pity and the taste was bitter on the back of his tongue.”

It reminds me of the GQ magazine interview when Jjongie admitted Minho’s passing/graduating high school bought up feelings of regret and maybe envy.

I can easily imagine this other scene, especially that first line being delivered by Minho with his trademark bug-eyed expression:

"What is wrong with you lately? You've been a huge asshole lately and now this ( ... )

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sea_side_view April 6 2011, 02:37:47 UTC
Every single comment you post has me squealing and giggle and flailing around like a damn fool. :'3 I love how in depth and thought out you are about it and I'm so glad you always catch the little literary things and I swear it makes MY heart melt when you catch them. I really love Jongho, which shouldn't come as a surprise because it's all about their balance. Two dominant men in a relationship is a really thrilling idea and it's very possible! When Jonghyun gives in to Minho in anyway it's because he wants to. And when Minho gives in to Jonghyun it's the same. It's a mutual respect between them :'3 laskfhkl;asdhadgf I feel like I'M the incoherent one XD I just love your comments ehehe and your icon 8] gonna have to hug you forever. Just latch on to you <3

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shineesbright April 6 2011, 03:07:39 UTC
Hahahahaha! Wae u makey me blush? It's all true =^3^=
I go completely barmy when I comment coz it's concerning my favourite things: SHINee & fiction, lol!
Ur writing is quality n I wanna give constructive feedback but I end waffaling n it turns into an English Lit paper, ottoke?!
You're quite right though, despite 1st appearances, the JongHo relationship works so well and if you really understand your characters, the story is then cohesive & memorable.
But yeah, I loved it & I saw that icon a while bk n I now thought 'how appropriate!:D
Bear hug back bb <3

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sea_side_view April 6 2011, 03:21:21 UTC
ehehe I love it! I love your feedback critiquing because it helps me notice little things that I can build upon and work with more in my writing :'3 and knowing the character is always so important. You want them to act like themselves of course! I'm just really glad that you liked it :'3 <3 ehehe it makes me so happy~!

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my dear Meghan kunoichi15 April 6 2011, 12:45:17 UTC
You are such a beautiful writer. I don't know if it's the fact that I feel close to you already or whatever, but all of this has been so personal and easily felt. And I could totally set Jjong and Minho in this AU, so easily.

PLUS you pulled my strings, the deepest ones. A LOST, SCARED, FRESHLY GRADUATED JOURNALIST. VERY familiar. Do I get a Minho then? GSDHGJSDG.

And the end was so endearing. You're amazing, you beautiful hoar. I love you.

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Re: my dear Meghan sea_side_view April 6 2011, 15:21:18 UTC
; A ; Ennaaaaaa <3 huhuhuhuhuu I'm so glad you liked it. Writing is so innately personal and it's so hard to get out of your own head when doing it. I was just playing on fears and dress everyone has in someway or another, that I feel quite often honestly even as someone who's had to pause schooling. I wanted it to be personal in that sense because it's so easy for people to relate to. And I'm glad that it was for you [hohohoo if not super relate able with the freshly graduated journalist ehehe I'll be your Minho baybay] But yes I'm rambling :'3 I love you bb, you super swag-tastic sexy sex <3 <3 <3

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OH! kunoichi15 April 7 2011, 07:17:36 UTC
I fooookin luv ya man

You really need to write more often. *nuzzles*

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Re: OH! sea_side_view April 8 2011, 06:07:03 UTC
:'3 I plan to bb, I plan to! I love you~

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