Pairing: Jonghyun/Minho
Rating: pg-13, swearing
Genre: fluff/romance
Summary: Jonghyun get's moody in the spring and Minho is the only one who knows how to handle him.
Author's Note: I haven't been in the zone lately at all but I got hit with this idea when I was staring out my window [Seattle, always raining. It's definitely not a myth]. But yeah. it'
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One of the many reasons why I love your fics, n this particular JongHo, is that you’ve incorporated so much of their real personalities (and situations) into the story that this relationship seems quite plausible. For example:
“Always so collected and strong in the face of change. Always ready for anything and the younger had basically been assured a position at his father's law firm after grad. Something Minho was comfortable with and understood already. Just thinking of it made his stomach twist. An odd cocktail of jealousy and self pity and the taste was bitter on the back of his tongue.”
It reminds me of the GQ magazine interview when Jjongie admitted Minho’s passing/graduating high school bought up feelings of regret and maybe envy.
I can easily imagine this other scene, especially that first line being delivered by Minho with his trademark bug-eyed expression:
"What is wrong with you lately? You've been a huge asshole lately and now this ( ... )
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I go completely barmy when I comment coz it's concerning my favourite things: SHINee & fiction, lol!
Ur writing is quality n I wanna give constructive feedback but I end waffaling n it turns into an English Lit paper, ottoke?!
You're quite right though, despite 1st appearances, the JongHo relationship works so well and if you really understand your characters, the story is then cohesive & memorable.
But yeah, I loved it & I saw that icon a while bk n I now thought 'how appropriate!:D
Bear hug back bb <3
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PLUS you pulled my strings, the deepest ones. A LOST, SCARED, FRESHLY GRADUATED JOURNALIST. VERY familiar. Do I get a Minho then? GSDHGJSDG.
And the end was so endearing. You're amazing, you beautiful hoar. I love you.
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You really need to write more often. *nuzzles*
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