Mmmmmmmmm, pierhymephileJanuary 19 2009, 14:46:31 UTC
OH MY GOD, THIS WAS PERFECTION.
I'm not even kidding. It's rare that I read *anything* that makes me laugh, but this? This is dreamy: A part of him, the dough-deep cynic, said that he shouldn’t trust the kid, that it would only lead to a cracked crust and smeared filling down the road.
Cracked crust and smeared filling?? LLLLLOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLL.
I absolutely loved this. You should share this over at xfiles!
Re: Mmmmmmmmm, pieseagrayJanuary 19 2009, 17:26:48 UTC
Thank you! I've been in Writer's Block with my WIPs so I had to try something...different. Wasn't sure how ridiculous it would be but I enjoyed writing it, which is a welcome change for me, lemme tell ya!
I don't know about xfiles though. This story is pretty silly. (Though I tried to raise it above the lowbar a bit with a vague play on "pie" and "pi" in Alex's speech.) :D
Oh wow, I love this! Funny and hearwarming at the same time, and so very well-written. Alex is such a beautiful pie! Those long curls...*gah* Must go look for pies now.
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I'm not even kidding. It's rare that I read *anything* that makes me laugh, but this? This is dreamy:
A part of him, the dough-deep cynic, said that he shouldn’t trust the kid, that it would only lead to a cracked crust and smeared filling down the road.
Cracked crust and smeared filling?? LLLLLOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLL.
I absolutely loved this. You should share this over at xfiles!
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I don't know about xfiles though. This story is pretty silly. (Though I tried to raise it above the lowbar a bit with a vague play on "pie" and "pi" in Alex's speech.) :D
I'm REALLY happy it made you laugh!!!!
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Must go look for pies now.
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Mmmmm...pie.
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