Comments | seaislewitch: Event Horizon by Sea Isle Witch

seaislewitch

Event Horizon by Sea Isle Witch

Aug 13, 2007 20:51

Title: Event Horizon
Characters: Draco, Pansy, Scorpius, Regulus, Lyra, Lucius, and Narcissa Malfoy; Emily and Bertram Parkinson; mentions of Severus Snape and Millicent Bulstrode
Rating/warnings: PG-13 for one suggestive situation and language
Word count: 5,000 words, complete, mostly gen, some romance (Draco/Pansy)
Canon compliancy: Harry Potter ( Read more... )

public, draco/pansy, fan fiction

Comments 39

gelsey August 14 2007, 02:36:51 UTC

Oh, I like it very much. I love the way the two were with their three children--I adore Lyra!!

I can see this happening very clearly. Excellent job.

seaislewitch August 14 2007, 20:22:19 UTC

Thanks, gelsey! I think after all Draco and Pansy had been through, they'd want to have a calm life, so I gave them some peace -- and three spirited children to keep them on their toes. Lyra was modeled after someone close to my heart. Thank you for reading, my friend, and also for the lovely complements.

amylee1178 August 14 2007, 03:17:20 UTC

I really really liked it. Especially how Draco and Pansy encouraged Scorpius to "mingle" with the other houses.

Great, as usual :)

seaislewitch August 14 2007, 20:28:09 UTC

I think Draco and Pansy would have learned a cruel lesson during their years at school, and by the time their first born was ready for Hogwarts, they would have had plenty of time to reflect on it. I thought Ravenclaw would be a good House to promote, given their connection through Pansy's mother. I think it would have been out of character for them to say, "Go party with the Gryffs," you know? *g* But, yes, a bit of mingling is a good thing.

Thanks for reading and your kind words, amylee1178.

vaughn7272000 August 14 2007, 06:08:07 UTC

After reading dry legal texts for days, you have no idea how refreshing it was to read something filled with emotion, yet still done with such subtlety that the last line just grabs you.

Reminds me of exactly why, when I think of this pairing, you're the first author that comes to mind.

seaislewitch August 14 2007, 20:40:14 UTC

Welcome back! It's wonderful to see you 'out and about' again!

I'm happy I was able to 'refresh' you. *giggles* I do try to write the characters with subtlety, so it's gratifying to know the story comes across as intended. Thank you so much for reading, vaughn7272000, and for your thoughtful complements.

lewlinx August 14 2007, 08:30:33 UTC

I have this HUGE smile on my face right now! I'm printing and reading it on my way home today!!! :D

I've missed you!!!! This morning as I walked to work I was thinking of you!

*hugs*

seaislewitch August 14 2007, 20:42:00 UTC

*grins with you* You have been MIA for too long!

Let me know what you think! *hugs*

lewlinx August 15 2007, 07:41:49 UTC

I finished it last night before going to bed in the end. I love how you've used canon and the trilogy blending them together for the perfect mix.

I will write you an email with a few things tonight. :)

Fantastic job, my friend!

seaislewitch August 15 2007, 17:39:55 UTC

Yes, this could be considered an add-on to my Trilogy.

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

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emeraldstag August 14 2007, 08:41:57 UTC

This was so entertaining to read! I loved little Lyra, and the interplay between the Parkinsons and Malfoys.

seaislewitch August 14 2007, 20:44:56 UTC

I think there would be a bit of 'one up wizardship' between the Malfoy and Parkinson grandparents. Of course, Lucius, would want to be top wizard. *g*

I'm so happy to hear it was entertaining! That was definitely my aim. Thanks for reading and commenting, emeraldstag.