Redeeming Eden Chapter Two

[seanix6amp]

Title: Redeeming Eden
Length: Chaptered
Rating: PG and growing
Pairings: YooSu, JaeHo, MinOther
Summary: Love, Hatred, Gratitude, Revenge. Is love worth all the pain they have to go through?

3rd November
The kitchen was a blur. The chefs were preparing food and the servants were rushed to serve everything as soon as it hit the plates.

Guests were pouring

Comments

[usagi_bara]

Hi!!

Awww~

Yoochun is sooo sweet!!

X3!!

And sorry I can't help you, I don't know either!

:S!

Waiting for next chap!

^^!

[seanix6amp]

Yup. Yoochun was.. unknowingly sweet. But that's just the way he is!
Cheers!

[ara_niey]

ahhh~chunnie's so nice..and straight forward too..
he really had the guts to just approach someone he hardly knew and said things like that..

[seanix6amp]

After the way he was "compensated" previously, he is really gutsy to approach Junsu like this.
Cheers!

[tumi18]

wow yoochun.. that was fast ♥
so yunho and yoochun are friends..
interesting...
^^

[yume_no_ato]

Kyaaa~ this fic is addicting! So much lovely drama is going to evolve! Yoochun unknowingly falling for his friend's lover is so sweet, and sad, and exciting all at the same time. I can't wait to see what happens!

[seanix6amp]

Let me add scary to that for you. Yoochun doesn't know that Junsu was Yunho's lover. Hah!
Cheers!

[seanix6amp]

Yoochun already had his mind set. And this was a coincidence, he didn't know that the person living in Yunho's house was Junsu.
Fast? Maybe a bit.
Cheers!

[chloe1910]

Yes! Stupid got a rival in love now!

Ok..before i say any further, you should let us in a little on why Yunho has changed so much thorughout the years...This is to avoid unnecessary cursing or durians throwing at Yunho my dear...haha..

But i like Yoochun man...his straigt forwardness is love!!ooh..I can't wait for the next update.

[seanix6amp]

The chapters will reveal the reasons for Yunho's change. All I can say is there's no Dong Bang evil character in my world. (No matter how boring it gets.) So we can tell the world here, no cursing or throwing whatever at Yunho! He's not the bad guy!

Yup, looks like I got Chun the way I wanted to write him as.
Cheers!

[kandadze]

funny how the scent you associated with Yoochun is almost the same as the one i used in my story :)
anyways- Chunnie definitely doesn't waste his time- nor his words. it's almost strange that he got through to Su so quickly. well- probably only for now. but you said in reply somewhere- Su was Yunho's lover. i know there's trouble between them now, but- are they still lovers, at least officially?
to follow the tradition... Yunho smells of vanilla and spice, but he was taking in the scent of coffee and mint. it's a minor thing, but still jarring. ne? ;)

oh, and- which link exactly did you use? if 'direct link', as it is, then yeah, on the preview you still have only the link. try putting *<*img src=* before the whole 'direct link' url, and close it with *>* (without the stars, of course :)) or just copy and paste the 'html code'. it always works for me. (let me know if you still have problems ^^)

thanks for sharing the story ♥

[seanix6amp]

Your story BBTFW? I guess we all read most of the stuff posted in the comms so it's subconciously planted in our brains and some of it would leak out unexpectedly.

It's again tradition that Junsu would have almost zero.. Oh, let's face it, he does have zero resistance towards Chun, he just puts on a strong front to hide it.
Nope, I mean what I wrote. HoSu were lovers. Not anymore. Definitely no more physical relation. Heart wise... well, Su seems to be refusing to let go. But officially, no more.

The smell thing took me quite a while to figure out. But I had to, if they were not talking and not looking at each other then I could only work on smell and touch.
Not much of nice clean masculine smells to choose from. :(

Thanks for the pic tip. Will try!

[kandadze]

yeah, that story. and i didn't mean it in a bad way. it just seems we both have a pretty fixed idea of what Chunnie's scent should be ;)

heh. seconded.
ah, good, so i read it right. well, then, at least Yunho can't officially say anything to Chunnie's plans, eh? ^^ Su still being in love with Yunnie might be a much bigger problem here-

shoot, i think i confused you here. what i meant was that you'd mixed tenses- or at least a thought and the action- it would sound better if it was 'Yunho smelled', instead of 'Yunho smells', ne?
i have to disagree with you here. i did quite a research for masculine scents, to find something fitting for both Chunnie and Su in my story, and there's a heap to choose from, once you know what they should smell like according to the way you portray their characters :)

no problem. did it work?

[seanix6amp]

Oh, okay. Didn't catch that the way you intended. Yup, difficult to match action and thought. 'Yunho smells' because he still smells the same. If 'Yunho smelled' then he would have to be carrying a different scent now?

Confess! I didn't do research on the available scents but that was really how I wanted to portray their characters. Just closed my eyes and tried to feel...

Research was done more for the chapter(3) I just posted. *See, rushing through stuff. Lowers quality.* The pics took me forever to find and sadly,
nope. Still didn't work. Pasted the entire HTML just as you suggested. Tried direct link too but still no good. Well, at least the links are there. Will still try though.
Cheers!