Redeeming Eden Chapter Four

Jan 03, 2008 00:30


Title: Redeeming Eden
Length: Chaptered
Rating: PG and growing
Pairings: YooSu, JaeHo, MinOther
Summary: Love, Hatred, Gratitude, Revenge. Is love worth all the pain they have to go through?

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usagi_bara January 2 2008, 17:53:18 UTC
I'm a little bit confused!

Did Jang Ji Dong push Junsu?

O.o!

Sorry, I didn't understand that part!

Poor Su, he's all injured!!

Waiting for next chap!

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seanix6amp January 3 2008, 21:52:50 UTC
He tripped Junsu. "a foot appeared to hook around his ankle"

Glad to clarify, Cheers!

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baeby_bloo_skys January 2 2008, 21:14:37 UTC
Thanks for the A/N, it helped clear things up :]
Can't wait for the next chapter!

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seanix6amp January 3 2008, 21:54:26 UTC
No prob, Just revealing what I can without killing the storyline.
Cheers!

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flyingkitee January 3 2008, 07:01:14 UTC
Nice fic! Waiting for the next chapter too! :D

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seanix6amp January 3 2008, 21:55:37 UTC
Thanks for reading! Will try to update soon.
Cheers!

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chloe1910 January 3 2008, 07:02:09 UTC
so..Yunho was actually trying to protect Junsu by being so cold to him? So who's the bastard here? The bloody stepfather?

I wonder why they wanna hurt Junsu..I think I'm beginning to understand the role of the bodyguards now...someone is threatening Junsu's life?

aik? I tot Junsu is supposed to be lotting some sort of revenge??? no action yet???Where's Minnie??? @_@

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chloe1910 January 3 2008, 07:03:24 UTC
er, I mean weren't Junsu and Minnie plotting for some revenge thingy or something like that????? so action yet???

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seanix6amp January 3 2008, 22:02:45 UTC
Yunho protecting Junsu by being cold..In a way, both yes and no. You'll see why later. I just feel that Yunho can still protect Junsu without being cold. But he just thinks that this is the best way.
I can only say, the stepfather is not a good man in this story.

The revenge has been plotted and in action but in the dark of course. I'll reveal bits of it along the way. It's not actually the main storyline for now, just a cause for what happens. The revenge will be more important later in the story.

Min... will try to bring him in soon..
Thanks for commenting, Cheers!

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chloe1910 January 4 2008, 01:28:58 UTC
i see i see..It's your story so take your time in introdusing anyone at anytime you want...I just missed seeing Minnie or Jae...*pout

I agree that Yunho could still protect Junsu without being cold but I think you'll reveal the reason why he's doing that in due time....

hm,your mysterious answer is not helping me at all...guess i'll just have to wait...only time will tells

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irerd_taga January 3 2008, 11:57:14 UTC
Sneaky Yoochun, stealing kisses from Junsu while he slept! Junsu's starting to warm up to Yoochun and hopefully will entrust his heart to him soon!

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seanix6amp January 3 2008, 22:05:39 UTC
Yoochun stole kisses, and he's also trying hard to steal Junsu's heart!
Thanks for commenting, Cheers!

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