Redeeming Eden Chapter Thirteen

Feb 03, 2008 16:18


Title: Redeeming Eden
Length: Chaptered
Rating: PG and growing
Pairings: YooSu, JaeHo, MinOther
Summary: Love, Hatred, Gratitude, Revenge. Is love worth all the pain they have to go through?

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chloe1910 February 3 2008, 10:17:50 UTC
The first part where Yunho pushed Junsu away almost rendered me to tears too..sigh...damn his step-father!!!

But I'm glad that Yoochun has someone watching Junsu...I just hope thatYoochun still don't know Junsu and Min's relationship...Yoochun is really being a gentleman to Junsu...not taking advantage on Junsu and opting to sleep ont he couch instead....

What Jae did for Yunho, bringing him back fromt he bar and not waking him up is really tender....i can feel that Jae's facination on Yunho is really gettting stronger...I just hope Yunho could snap himself out of his own misery soon enough to notice Jae's existence...

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seanix6amp February 3 2008, 13:20:21 UTC
I don't know who's in more pain between HoSu, but most probably Yunho.

Yoochun doesn't know about Min. The person he sent only reports if something bad happens like if Junsu gets hurt or like in this case, thrown out. He's not followed like by the paparazzi.
That's the irresistible thing about Yoochun. He can be both naughty and nice.

Yunho snapping out of it is one thing. It takes 2 hands to clap. Jae needs to stop holding himself back.

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chloe1910 February 3 2008, 15:13:40 UTC
I agree..i think it's Yunho cause Junsu at least has Yoochun with him. But Yunho, he knows he has to let go not because he wanted to..but was forced to by his asshole stepfather ( ... )

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seanix6amp February 3 2008, 18:23:45 UTC
Looking just at their relationship and not taking into consideration the revenge plans.
Ignorance is bliss. Given that Junsu doesn't know about Jang forcing Yunho, he's already in less pain.
But to the all-knowing Yunho.. Aiz...

Yoochun suspects that business marriage is the reason why Yunho is behaving this way and that's because as Managing Director of Park Corporation International, he belongs to the same kind of family. (Yes, hint hint.. Oh no, Junsu..)

Hopeless romantics like this who are all sweet nothings, pledges undying love.. and then really plunges in to save the troubled love or perish together.. exactly Chun.

Oh, the puppy dog eyes.. melts... *Tries harder with the JaeHo*

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irerd_taga February 3 2008, 11:23:56 UTC
Hmmmm the final nail in the coffin for whatever's left of Junsu's love for Yunho eh! Now he'll be able to concentrate solely on Yoochun.
Jae's fascination with Yunho is beginning to deepen. Hope Yunho will be able to realise that a replacement for Junsu in his heart is readily available in the form of the good doctor!

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seanix6amp February 3 2008, 13:28:22 UTC
Actually, I feel that Junsu still does not hate Yunho. He is just disappointed and hurt. But yes, Yoochun is the only 1 for him now.

Jae is, sadly still not in love yet. And Yunho lets go physically but his heart is filled with Junsu.
Darn.. I need to plant and grow some JaeHo love!

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sen_1209 February 3 2008, 11:43:37 UTC
oh yay, yoosu are finally living under the same roof. poor yunho, it must had been so painful to let junsu go.the hosu love is making me feel so guilty about supporting yoosu! hopefully jae is able to replace junsu's position in yunho's heart. =D your story is super addictive.never fail to make me crave for more!! ^^

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seanix6amp February 3 2008, 13:38:05 UTC
It is painful that Yunho lets Junsu go physically but in his heart he still holds on so stubbornly.

I felt guilty when YooSu first started out. And till now. Yoochun's heart belongs solely to Junsu but Junsu was still hanging on to Yunho. At least 1 pair is complete now.

Jae needs to fall in love with Yunho first, his fascination now is not enough. Then he can give comfort to Yunho with love.

Glad you like this! =)

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ara_niey February 3 2008, 13:25:07 UTC
oh god!~you make my heart bleeds for yunnie again!~T_T
but yeah..you did remind me before this..*sigh*

but yoosu was so sweet!~♥
thank god chunnie find him..or else..*sigh*

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seanix6amp February 3 2008, 13:45:52 UTC
Aiz.. And I almost made myself cry.

I cannot imagine what would have happened if Junsu met with bad people in such a condition. *Nightmare!*

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soloscry February 3 2008, 16:13:32 UTC
I'm sorry to ask this, but can you please lj-cut? @_@ The amount of pictures on this is killing my friend page T-T. Thank you!

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seanix6amp February 3 2008, 17:54:45 UTC
I thank you for asking. Must have slipped my mind.
Sorry. Did as requested. Hope it's better now. Makes my journal neater too.

By the way, waiting for your updates.. especially 'Circus of the Damned' XP

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soloscry February 3 2008, 20:13:54 UTC
I'm glad you didn't take any offense to it T-T~! It does make an LJ easier to browse when everything loads quickly <3!

<33 I shall try to update sometime this week, though it might be Mysteria LOL~~! :33

Love!

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