Redeeming Eden Chapter Fourteen

Feb 11, 2008 01:30


Title: Redeeming Eden
Length: Chaptered
Rating: PG and growing
Pairings: YooSu, JaeHo, MinOther
Summary: Love, Hatred, Gratitude, Revenge. Is love worth all the pain they have to go through?

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chloe1910 February 10 2008, 18:30:15 UTC
what a shame that Yunho's mom passed away..she was really kind to Junsu.

I'm glad that Yunho broke off the engagement..I'm truly impressed that Yunho realised Junki & Eun Ah's attraction to each other..it's really nice of him to break the engagement....

Yoosu momnet was nice..it's great to see how well, Yoochun is taking care of Junsu...Junsu truly deserve someone like Yoochun to love him whole heartedly....

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seanix6amp February 11 2008, 21:17:43 UTC
It's cruel to Junsu, it's like losing a mother twice in a lifetime.

I always liked the playful feeling between YooSu. It's so... stress-less love.

I know I'm taking this wrongly, but it begins to sound like Yunho breaks off the engagement because of Junki. But no, the bringing them together was a 'might as well' after the engagement, not the other way round.
Yes, with everything else happening around him, the fact that Yunho still saw the little signs of mutual attraction shows how sharp and observant a person he is.

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chloe1910 February 12 2008, 03:30:37 UTC
OIC...I've misunderstood you then..thank for clearing this up...

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seanix6amp February 12 2008, 23:54:09 UTC
No prob.
Cheers!

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kattan69 February 10 2008, 18:30:16 UTC
Have to wait patiently for more updates to reveal the actual hidden meanings - especially the mysterious Jae and Min and their parts in it.

Pls write soon and thanks!

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seanix6amp February 11 2008, 21:20:28 UTC
*Tries to write faster*

Thanks for reading!

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chloe1910 February 10 2008, 18:33:07 UTC
Just wanna add that it's a shame that there were no Yunjae here...

Btw, Happy Lunar New year yeah seanix6amp.....

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seanix6amp February 11 2008, 21:23:38 UTC
Happy Lunar New Year to you too!

Kay.. I get the hint XP
Yunjae.. Have to create chances for them to meet then.

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chloe1910 February 12 2008, 04:05:13 UTC
hahaha *wink wink*

oh ILU so....

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lmaii February 10 2008, 19:47:33 UTC
Wow O__O
really? pure accident? that's so sad.
for both ho and su. i seriously love the yoosu going on here xD

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moon1084 February 10 2008, 21:19:29 UTC
sad the mom died. the yoosu was cute! i hope you get some jaeho, because its time yunho gets some love too!

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seanix6amp February 11 2008, 21:28:59 UTC
Agree.. It's time Yunho gets some love and comfort after all the pain and suffering he has gone through.

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seanix6amp February 11 2008, 21:26:18 UTC
Yup, real accident. The loss of this good character is sad, but especially for her 3 'sons'.

YooSu's little moments like this are always fun to write.
Cheers!

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irerd_taga February 11 2008, 00:38:01 UTC
For a moment there I thought Ji Dong was responsible for Yunho's mother's death. Poor Yunho and Junsu!
Glad that Yunho called off the engagement and stood up to Ji Dong about it.
The Yoosu scene was excitable in the beginning and sweet but tearjerking after the phone call.
When's Jae making a move?

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seanix6amp February 11 2008, 21:34:55 UTC
I thought of that too but Jang wouldn't benefit from her death. In fact, now that she's dead and Yunho takes over the company, he has more to lose. Therefore, he wouldn't have planned to kill her.

Yunho did the best thing for himself when he called it off, but his last words were indeed kind of rash.

My favourite YooSu part was how Yoochun comforted Junsu after the call.

Jae's a man of unexpected moves. I tend to think that he doesn't work with logic. Need to find him a chance to get closer first.

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