Redeeming Eden Chapter Twenty Three

Apr 06, 2008 13:58


Title: Redeeming Eden
Length: Chaptered
Rating: PG and growing
Pairings: YooSu, JaeHo, MinOther
Summary: Love, Hatred, Gratitude, Revenge. Is love worth all the pain they have to go through?

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chloe1910 April 6 2008, 08:46:34 UTC
I like Lee Minwoo..I thnk he's rather cute..and thanks for the A/N..I'm glad that he's not a pervert...

Ah, Junsu, Are you trying to get yourself killed by wandering off inthe snow without the coat and scarf? Why do you want to torture yourself so..Aigoo..the Yoosu is seriously killing me here..both are idiots who acted differently from how they felt, especially Yoochun the fool. But I guess that the only self protective mechanism he could thought he could use at the moment...

Aha..I hope Minwoo made a big fuss about Junsu's disapperance to the point that Junki and Yoochun knew about it..I hope the one who found Junsu is Yoochun. If that's your plan, I hope both of them will be coped up in some cottage in the snowy mountain for the night before rescue came...*keep my finger cross that this is gonna happen*

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 14:56:19 UTC
Junsu wasn't thinking right, maybe he wasn't thinking at all. He only had 'Yoochun, Yoochun and Yoochun' in his mind.
He wasn't trying to kill himself, the coat and scarf made him feel restricted in his movements so he threw them off. You know how irritating winter wear gets sometimes...

Minwoo would of course tell the whole world about losing Junsu, he really cares for Su and would want to find him as soon as possible.
With so many people searching.. who would find Junsu... erhm.. *thinking*

Cottage on a mountain that people use for skiing and where there's a hotel right at the foot, with many resorts surrounding.. kinda, difficult...

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lmaii April 6 2008, 16:36:16 UTC
YOOCHUN WOULD!!! HOMG!

sorry to intrude =='

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 21:35:48 UTC
Looks like everybody wants Yoochun to save Su... Oh, he WAS part of the reason why Su is missing.. *o*

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yume_no_ato April 6 2008, 09:37:43 UTC
I love this chapter! The Yoosu make-out scene, and sweet Minwoo, and Junsu getting lost in the snow! Kyaaa~! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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didikoishi April 6 2008, 10:06:21 UTC
;-;
I hope Yoosu will find their 'Love in the ice' in the next chapter!
*huggles*

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 15:02:04 UTC
Hope so too..
They first fell in love when it was freezing cold..
Maybe this is what they need to move back to love.
*o*

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 14:59:48 UTC
You're happy that Junsu's lost in the snowy mountains???
K, read you wrong... Everybody's shocked.
;P ;P ;P Glad you liked the fact that YooSu had a hot kiss!

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zhyune April 6 2008, 09:46:21 UTC
updated:D!

I love the way you described yoochun's feelings for junsu.

argh. their short and sweet kiss, thats exactly what the both of them need

;;__;; JUNSU!!! omg he's going to be so sick in the mountains. yoochun please save our junsu!

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 15:04:19 UTC
Yoochun could do better. He's just too stubborn.
But he'll definitely try to save Junsu.. the love is too deep.
Cheers!

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ji_yul April 6 2008, 10:32:23 UTC
minus six degrees??
Oh! Someone save su!!
btw, new reader!
oh, can you tell me how to post the next chapter??
I dunno how to use LJ *cries*
Love ur fic! XD

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 15:12:54 UTC
Yes, freezing cold. Su.. will live.
Glad you like this. :)

You can either post to the community that you joined by clicking on the 'post to community' tab at the top centre of page or post to your journal first then post the link at the community like I did.
Can email me if you need more help, my email addy is at my user info/profile.
Cheers!

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tumi18 April 6 2008, 11:25:36 UTC
they're so stupid..
they clearly needed each other...
ugh...
hope they'll realize that soon..

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seanix6amp April 6 2008, 15:19:21 UTC
I think they both know it. But Yoochun's stupid pride/stubborness/whatever you call it, and Junsu's principles/'need to stay with Yunho' stops them from going back to each other.
Aiz...

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