Love in the Wayward Station (of so many things)

Dec 16, 2010 15:08

When Pride and Shame
fall by the wayside
you will see what remains
In the small corners between Could Have Been
and Impending
When shadows flicker in peripheral vision
as souls pass by and some cry out
in ferocious declaration against Illusion
You will be the Watcher, the Waiter,
the Seer, the tale Taker,
taking this into the account
embossing itself ever ( Read more... )

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dragons_wine December 17 2010, 00:10:57 UTC
I like it. I like that you can take the whole or just individual paragraphs and they work just as well. I like the first to and the last best of all.

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seaofzen December 18 2010, 04:13:37 UTC
Thank you, sweetie. Breaking it into sections like that helped me fine tune it. I'm glad you appreciate that. How are you?

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dragons_wine December 18 2010, 11:03:32 UTC
Quite well. Love mortuary school, new kitties, need more time to paint. How've you been? Where have you been ? :)

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rotting_orange December 17 2010, 01:49:49 UTC
Lovely =)

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seaofzen December 22 2010, 22:28:32 UTC
thank you. =)

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createdestiny December 17 2010, 03:18:39 UTC
Truly lovely.

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seaofzen December 22 2010, 22:29:04 UTC
As are you. Really, thank you.

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mayamaia December 17 2010, 04:26:37 UTC
Beauty-filled girl.

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seaofzen December 18 2010, 04:12:39 UTC
mirrors. =)

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