Desperate call for a quick beta.

[search_soleil]

I decided to do the creative story option for my Enchanted Imagination (a.k.a. my Fantasy Is Rad seminar) final, and it is in desperate need of a look-over before I hand it in tomorrow at 11:30AM EDT. If anybody runs across this post between now and 11 tomorrow morning and has time to offer some quick and dirty constructive criticism, I'd

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[miabee023]

Okay, so, I'm uncertain of time zones here, but hopefully this will reach you in time. I marked it all up in a Word Document, so you can go download that here:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=X1R2M5XI

If you have any problems, please send me a PM! (Although I am getting the sinking feeling that you are on the East Coast, and I am too late already, aren't I?)

[search_soleil]

Ahhh, finally done with finals!

Thank you so much for this! I have literally been either studying or sleeping for the past four days, so I didn't have a chance to thank you, but this was so helpful, I can't tell you! Thank you so much!

A lot of the overall weird stuff you noticed was because I was working with a page limit and didn't have space to even things out like a wanted to. If I ever get around to writing this story for real, I'll go right back to your beta and give lots of those points some serious consideration. All of your smaller edits, though, were spot on and life-saving.

Thanks again! *Internet hugs*

[miabee023]

Sure thing! (Editing other people's papers/short stories/whatever is actually my hobby. And my dream future career. My life is sad, I know.) I'm glad it was useful!