Comments | searisme: FIC:Storm

searisme

FIC:Storm

Jan 12, 2009 18:23

Oki, so this is my first fanfic in, well, ages, and my fist in the Es21 fandom. Don’t be too harsh. It is also a whim and a fancy, and pure PWP smut, R or NC-17. Sena probably comes off as is OOC, but that is just my first attempt at him, and also a result of me being dead sick of some of the milk-and-water, waaaay!uke takes on him I’ve read. I ( Read more... )

eyeshield 21, my fanfic

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cosplaycat January 13 2009, 03:09:51 UTC

In case you check here for comments instead of es21yaoi:

Oh my gods I think I'm in love with you!!!! :3
That was a wonderful SenaShin (before you, I didn't know such a thing existed!)
Please feel welcome while you are in our little fandom, for we are glad to have you.

hearts!

akira_atsushi January 17 2009, 01:39:05 UTC

*hyperventilates* omggg o////0
Sena is so agressive! ..i like very muchXD
where were they when they were doing it? somewhere unseen in the bushes i hope lol
Wonderful writings overall and thank you for sharing^^

searisme January 17 2009, 13:17:56 UTC

Thank you!
Yeah..*sweatdrop*... When I look at my notes I see that I had intended to move them, or do something about the location, bushes or whatnot, but then I must've forgotten... Yeah.

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searisme January 23 2009, 17:40:27 UTC

Thanks! I'm happy it was hot - it was my first real lemon *blushblush*.
And yeah, I know - I was planning on "moving" them.. somewhere not in the middle of the sidewalk, but yeah... Stupid mistake. There are other mistakes as well, I'm just rusty cause I write so rarely.
I'll see about writing more - I actually don't know from where *this* came... talk about sudden inspiration.
(And heck, I'm happy you're reading it at all!)

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Re: location searisme May 4 2011, 20:37:20 UTC

Thanks!

Shin saying he'll be the challenger is actually a somewhat lame pun -> 'seme', top in yaoi terminology, means challenger...