third edit of sensual poem (stiiiiiill not done)

[seconds_2_life]

Your breath on my skin

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[polaroidharlot]

I smell you lips after we’ve kissed,
I smell them on mine,
the aroma of your sex, I breathe it in
and let it flood my mind.

i love the tiny rhyme... and the imagery. as though you're smelling perhaps her sex or her lipgloss or just HER on you... such a change from i taste you on my lips. that was beautiful... i fucking love this poem.