I like that. It's nicely expanded. I thought that they might have gone into a discussion of writing the note and played on his "songwriting" in that.
Telling a story through dialog is EXTREMELY difficult. It's kind of like poetry - because there are so many limitations on it. That's why I like it. When I write poetry (which is rare), I usually choose a really tight poetic form (like a sonnet). It's a real challenge.
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Telling a story through dialog is EXTREMELY difficult. It's kind of like poetry - because there are so many limitations on it. That's why I like it. When I write poetry (which is rare), I usually choose a really tight poetic form (like a sonnet). It's a real challenge.
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I wanted you to know I read your story and I am very impressed. I'm proud that you did something productive with your sick day!
For some reason I read it with Barry having a Scottish accent-- but he should probably have a Yopoer accent hey?
Peace
-B
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