I wrote this novel just for you 3/3

[secretlytodream]

part two | masterpost

Comments

[kelleigh]

My God, that was amazing! It was dark and horrifying and at the same time, written so gorgeously it made my stomach hurt a little bit, and I couldn't stop reading. Like every line was essential and perfect, especially after Jensen met Jeremy and his world turned on end.

Your ending was unexpected (though inevitable) and flawless! Leaving it at the perfect place for our minds to wander off and just imagine what'll come next for both of them. Now, I think I need to go read it again. Bravo!

[secretlytodream]

WOAH O.O
Thank you SOOOO much! I'm really happy the ending worked or you! ^___^

[spriteful]

Wow, that just blew me away. Really, I couldn't stop reading. It was dark and felt like watching a horror movie; you cover your eyes with your hands because you don't want to see but you can't resist peeking from between your fingers anyway. Really amazing.

[secretlytodream]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked the imagery :)

[palodoecious]

Wow really awesome, i want this for a movie! like really! so coool, i didnt want to stop reading haha, but in the end jensen left right? or its a little confusing for me in the end, if they are together or Jensen left him? BUt other than that 5/5 Awesome! Thanks!

[secretlytodream]

He did leave. He like freed himself or something. But this for me is a happy ending, so, you know...yeah :)

Glad you liked! Thanks a lot :)

[abouttheboys]

So a few days ago I read a fic by that was dark and lovely and horror-esque and thought I want more and I found this. I loved this. Pretty much everything about other. The ending is a little sad, but every other story I've read or movie I watched, the killer and lover dies (or just one, ie: Bonnie and Clyde) when they stay together, so this could have been a lot more sad. I loved how it never left from Jensen's POV and even stayed in his head during the sex scenes (which I normally skip, but yours were far too pivotal, not that they were long and detailed, but still). Wow...long ass comment, sorry. I just loved this so much.

[secretlytodream]

Oh, can you give me a link to that fic?

I kinda couldn't kill them, or any one of them. And I'm glad everything worked for you. Thanks for commenting!

[abouttheboys]

It's called Neverwood and was written at j2_everafter for the challenge/prompt Peter Pan.

[secretlytodream]

Oh, thanks a lot for the link!

[fleshflutter]

That was very dark and very bleak, but I did love your style here and I think you made some really brave choices in the plot, so huge kudos for that! <3

[secretlytodream]

WOW.
Ok, can I go and happy now? Cause SRSL.