Hm, unfinished? How exactly? Just curious :) Not, like, it IS finished, you know? I mean, the story. It's an open door, but I wanted to stop there. Thanks for reading though! :) Glad you enjoyed.
I loved this so much, absolutely amazing, I envy your talent for writing and omg I feel so baddirtywrong right now because I totally get why Jensen was so turned on by Jeremy/Jared. Is it wrong that I found this so incredibly hot? lol excellent work <3 it
Damn. I had "Natural Born Killers" flashbacks here like whoa, even if the plots were only peripherally similar. The same dreamlike, surrealistic feeling. I'm honestly not sure who scared me more: Jared or Jensen. And so beautifully written. This is a hell of an achievement. Hats off, man. Wow.
Er, don't know what "Natural Born Killers" is :P I'm glad those two scared you! I really wanted to achieve the effect like this. Thank you so much for reading! ♥
Here you go. The resemblance is really just in mood -- NBK was phantasmagorical, essentially a retelling of Bonnie and Clyde, modernized. And I mean any comparison in a very positive light. :) Actually I think the blurred lines of Jensen's feelings are even more frightening than Jared's more clear-cut psychopathy. But there's something about them coming together as they have -- oh man, this is TRUE horror. I think I gotta go rec the stuffing outta this. \o/
OH, nice. Thanks again then! ^___^ Maybe I need to watch it now :D
Jared in this story is lost. I mean, yeah, maybe each psycho serial killer is lost in some way, but this Jared, I don't know, maybe there is something good deep down inside of him, like, in those good days you can see a glimpse of it. Or, more even, in those bad days, when Jared loses his masks and all. And yes, you're right, Jensen IS more frightening here, because he had a choice and which one did he choose? I mean, he doesn't know about himself and I think this is what makes him even more frightening. He knows now how not to kill again, but won't he actually do it in the future? Maybe, as it's been said, this story isn't finished, or, isn't finished completely - I absolutely agree with that. because there're still so many way to put a dot into this, I can't even tell. And maybe I should do it, some time in the future. This is the strongest piece I've written so far, and I made some brave choice in the plot here (as flesh said), and I just hope that readers will see
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I'm glad he was able to step away from it all - but I'm afraid now for Jeremy/Jared! will he be able to do the same? I think Jensen was the only creature keeping him from killing...
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Exellent! Marvelous job!!!
I have to admit - it feel a little bit unfinished, but I guess there is a reason why steak tastes better medium rare))))
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Thanks for reading though! :) Glad you enjoyed.
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but the fic is reaslly brilliant!
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I'm glad those two scared you! I really wanted to achieve the effect like this. Thank you so much for reading! ♥
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Maybe I need to watch it now :D
Jared in this story is lost. I mean, yeah, maybe each psycho serial killer is lost in some way, but this Jared, I don't know, maybe there is something good deep down inside of him, like, in those good days you can see a glimpse of it. Or, more even, in those bad days, when Jared loses his masks and all. And yes, you're right, Jensen IS more frightening here, because he had a choice and which one did he choose? I mean, he doesn't know about himself and I think this is what makes him even more frightening. He knows now how not to kill again, but won't he actually do it in the future? Maybe, as it's been said, this story isn't finished, or, isn't finished completely - I absolutely agree with that. because there're still so many way to put a dot into this, I can't even tell. And maybe I should do it, some time in the future. This is the strongest piece I've written so far, and I made some brave choice in the plot here (as flesh said), and I just hope that readers will see ( ... )
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I'm glad he was able to step away from it all - but I'm afraid now for Jeremy/Jared! will he be able to do the same? I think Jensen was the only creature keeping him from killing...
*hugs you tight*
Thank you for this...
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting hon! :)
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