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irishphoenix711 in secretsofluna

You & Me

Dec 11, 2006 01:56

Title: You & Me
Pairing: Lucille Malfoy/Sirius Potter; references to Lucille/Phillip, Lucius/Siobhan
Rating: PG
A/N: Sins-Verse, Post-Acts Of Repentence [how sad is that? Maybe I should finish the first story before writing one-shots that take place after the sequel? x.x]. skriven för min älskling ♥

( I learnt it from my parents )

setting: sins universe, character: lucille

Comments 7

msqu December 11 2006, 06:12:30 UTC

Oh, wow! I'm so torn as to wether I should keep this icon, or use the fangirling one. But this one fits the piece so well.

Gah. What to say...?

I really felt this one, Jenna. It's simple and poignant and I'm desperate to have that kind of love, and when they kissed it was just...-blissfully happy sigh-

And the walking down the aisle... Squee. And I would try to go on for my love about this, but...it would be superfluous and rather not good enough.

But I will say that it's been a while since I've loved one of your stories THIS much. I always love your stories. But not always THIS much. And I do. I love it THIS much.

msqu December 11 2006, 06:33:41 UTC

PS I didn't really mention how much I've completely fallen for Sirius Potter. He's spectacular in the small glimpse of what he's got here. Enough to capture my heart already.

water_jade December 11 2006, 06:17:24 UTC

“If any of us knew what we were in for when it comes to love, we’d be smart and stay the hell away, wouldn’t we?” I adore that line. Sirius makes so much sense! I love, too, that I can see glimmers of both people's parents in them, and a bit of their own personalities, too. Jenna, your characters have so much spirit, it really is as though they're all like Siobhan and sitting next to you.

But now, when I'm reading about Phillip and Lucille, I'm going to be going *pssh* to myself because I know what's really happening. What then? >.> Yes, I'm getting ahead of myself. So be it.

fantasium December 11 2006, 06:38:58 UTC

*bites lip*

But... But... Now you can't... Now you have to...

Do you remember what you told me? Because... now that you have written this, you really don't have a choice, see. Because if you don't fulfill the promise that this story is, you shall break your First Fangirl's heart.

So, the excerpts alone made my eyes very teary. This? I'm not even going to pretend not to be crying. This whole little piece is just... perfect.

Gah. *is unworthy*

*uses icon and switches herself with Lucille and Sirius with Sirius*

fantasium December 11 2006, 07:51:34 UTC

(If Mar can add a PS, then so can I.)

Guess what?

I just realised that your stories are the best thing to get. I mean... there are no greater gifts. And I don't mean gifts to me personally, but gifts as in general gifts to other people. Nothing that warms my heart more or that makes me squee louder. And even when you write a fic for someone specifically, they are gifts ever so easy to share. =)

Really, I didn't need the fic. (Well, having it was awful nice, so don't interpret that the wrong way.) Just reading "skriven för min älskling" in the A/N made my heart ache that way it does from loving and being loved by you, and made silly, emotional tears appear in my eyes.

(Ridiculous, isn't it? >.>)

stellarlyssa December 12 2006, 03:50:48 UTC

So now that I'm coherent again (>.>), I would like to say that I'm glad this isn't smut. Because it was really beautiful. I adore Lucille. I'd forgotten that.

"She kissed his lips softly, and then rested her head on his shoulder, closing her eyes and smiling because she finally knew how her mother felt to be in her father’s arms." << That was the line that made me cry. Guhness. I love it. It's still making me teary.

Love it. ♥

msqu July 13 2007, 02:37:16 UTC

So the real reason I read the other Lucille story today was so that I could actually read about Sirius and Lucille. I remembered that I loved and adored this story, but I had no idea why because.... I'd simply forgotten.

Lucille felt her heart pound. Everything felt so right, so close. The kiss was soft and at the same time it managed to turn her world upside-down and then right-side up again. It was so different from the passionate kisses she’d shared with Phillip, or the fiercely stubborn love she had harboured for him. Being in Sirius’ arms, kissing him, and feeling his hands as they gripped her tightly - the moment was full of uncertainty and wonderment and intimacy. It was nothing something she had imagined and she felt it was something she never could have imagined.But Jenna... This story is so beautiful it's beyond words. That paragraph was so moving when I read it before, so moving now. I still yearn for this kind of love of my own, and I yearn for more stories like this - by you and others - that are pure and perfect and ( ... )