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FIC: Scrap Paper; NC-17; 4,800 words

Feb 14, 2005 20:04

Scrap Paper
by Natt

Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The students of Hogwarts are obsessed with origami, and everyone takes advantage of the trend in their own way.

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gryffingirl February 15 2005, 04:25:26 UTC

too cute for words! I loved the intimacy and the awkward fumbly feeling of their first snog....perfect Valentine's day fic! <33333

nattish February 15 2005, 23:28:16 UTC

Fumbly is sweet. :) Thank you for reading!

<3! switchknife February 15 2005, 04:28:20 UTC

Awwww. Natt, I swear, no one can make romance as delightfully dry as this... :)

Re: <3! nattish February 15 2005, 23:27:46 UTC

Ha. I can read romance fic all day, but if I'm writing it I can't take it too seriously. ;)

chuffing February 15 2005, 04:48:46 UTC

Potter watched it. Draco watched him.

Best canon summary ever! :p

This is marvelous. It's so awkward and unsure and real. This is how it would happen for teenagers. You have some great lines in here, too, that I will never forget, if I can help it. My favourites, by far, have to be these:

I'm the origami master here," Draco snapped. "I say it's a goose.

and

It was just like in his fantasies, only Potter wasn't wearing chaps.

I have been giggling for a good 15 minutes now. I love it. Thanks!

nattish February 15 2005, 23:29:30 UTC

Thank you.

I wish I could find a piece of fanart with Harry in chaps!

chuffing February 15 2005, 23:32:13 UTC

djinniyah drew him in a cowboy outfit once. For the Ole West Challenge at andropotterist, I think. I'm pretty sure he had chaps on. :)

nattish February 15 2005, 23:33:43 UTC

What? :O

I have to find that sompelace. Thank you bunches.

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anjenue February 15 2005, 04:55:19 UTC

*dies laughing* This was so...so...awkward, and so perfect -- it's really nice to see a first time go not perfectly, and the tongue like a squid was just brilliant, not to mention Draco's distraction techniques to get Harry in his line of kissage in the first place. And the end, oh my god. *dies laughing some more*

You are brilliant.

(And I really am stupid. Ignore me. *headdesks*)

nattish February 15 2005, 23:32:36 UTC

Heh heh heh, should I tell you that I read your first attempts at commenting in my inbox? Don't worry, I've made similar mistakes! :D

Thank you for enjoying the fic. <3

anjenue February 15 2005, 23:34:46 UTC

Hee, I figured you would have. I'm not especially good at smooth saves. *laughs* This is what happens when I read posts without paying attention to who's made them.

nattish February 16 2005, 03:03:10 UTC

I actually haven't been posting at all in the past 2 or 3 months, so I wouldn't have expected any different! So, erm, nice to meet you? *shakes hand*

shikishi February 15 2005, 05:19:05 UTC

Oh lovely and witty and just the perfect amount of Romance to a very canon depiction of the boys. Wonderful.

nattish February 15 2005, 23:34:08 UTC

Thanks a lot!